Today I Cry

Today I cry……. For what once was Today I cry……… For right now ,this very moment Today I cry……. For a not so happily ever after Today I cry……. For going through the motions Today I cry…… For all the lies Today I cry…… For things said and unsaid Today I cry…… For wanting to say farewell to love 2-6-17 Alexis Y.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/6/2017 9:56:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, it was full of emotions, remember bad days come in everyone s life, their are basically days when I just sit in my bed and cry because I m sad but that doesn t mean that good days will never come, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/6/2017 11:18:00 PM

This definitely conveys an all encompassing, emotional, heaving the slowed CRY. Been there, in fact your captured it for us all. I hope that today, you hope. Hugs ... CayCay

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/23/2017 8:24:00 PM

Emotion is present. This is an expressive entry. Its sad when love fades. Well done

Jan Allison

Date: 2/17/2017 3:54:00 PM

so full of emotion Alexis ... lets hope tomorrow is going to be a brighter day:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/9/2017 2:47:00 AM

I cry too with you for such a heartfelt piece, Alexis:)

Darren White

Date: 2/7/2017 9:30:00 AM

I sit down with you and feel your sadness. Cry. And write.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/6/2017 9:19:00 PM

I cry with you, for the beauty of this poem!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/6/2017 9:14:00 PM

I feel the depths of sorrow in this beautifully written poem, Alexis...thank God better days always return. L&B, Rhonda

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/6/2017 5:34:00 PM

A very well expressed sadness, Alexis. Excellent poem. Writing about the subject of losing a love is a very emotional task. Job well done. Love always, dear.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/6/2017 4:15:00 PM

a sullen write though life always opens a new window, alexis... greeat stuff!..huggs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/6/2017 12:24:00 PM

Dear Alexis, we all live with a series of situations in life, especially love lost that make us sad and full of regrets In a few well-crafted words, you have artfully brought these feelings together in one excellent emotive piece! A-7! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2017 9:02:00 AM

- Oh ... so sad - Great written, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/6/2017 8:32:00 AM

This is filled with so many sad emotions...So deep..dear Alexis...We all pass through sad farewells in life...But the sun will always shine again.

Chris Green

Date: 2/6/2017 7:43:00 AM

Such a sad poem to start the week. I think we all say farewell to love many time overs, but it seems when we least expect it, love finds us once again. Nicely done Alexis.