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To Whisper Mildly---Lgt

In moments when the twilight sparks To gently flare as dark embarks, Tender comes eve swinging a hum While air-brushed clouds, on flight, succumb. Yet, through the lull of sky, I hear Their voices billow quite unclear Whispering mildly, still I know Those refrains from seasons ago. Somehow, before the call of morn When foggy mist glides on hawthorns, And daybreak hails a new sunset I trace past journeys now at rest. Amidst the quiver of my dreams, Beloved voices float midstream On to pathways that bless each name; Marked deeply in my soul, aflame. Andrea Dietrich's Let's Get Technical Contest ~new poem~

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Date: 8/18/2014 7:16:00 AM
This is a great write... I see that it won in a contest too.. Congrats my friend!!!
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:12:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:38:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Nette,, pic comes alive,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/28/2014 6:03:00 AM
I'm not surprised to see this one with a high placement, nette, as it is very lovely and full of the imagery that andrea likes - congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:59:00 PM
So beautiful, Nette. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:16:00 PM
Back with big congrats on a great win, sweet Nette.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/27/2014 3:36:00 PM
I LOVED THIS ONE. CONGRATUALTIONS ON YOUR WIN. lOVE, JOYCE
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:25:00 PM
For the imagery and the near perfection of your writing technique, this one gets a high placement in my contest, Nette. That line about hawthorns wowed me. Last verse as well. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:02:00 PM
Beatiful words that whisper and flow. Great win, Nette
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:09:00 AM
Nothing so beautiful as words penned from a sweet soul... Hugs, dear Nette.. Arlene
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Date: 7/21/2014 6:12:00 AM
It may be a whisper, but this poem does speak volumes, nette! I like the beautiful imagery you have laced here-- and the flow is melodic. Beautiful write! And I sure am glad you are ok, and safe! I was wondering about you, and hoping walang nasira sa inyo, sa amin, and daming punong nabali at natumba :(... Hopefully back to normal na sa inyo lahat, and ingat ka lagi!
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Date: 7/20/2014 11:27:00 PM
Dear Nette: Someone once said: "Words can make magic." You know what? Your wordplay makes more than magic! In my view, you are the 'Poet Laurette' of this realm called PoetrySoup dot-com. Any objections, anyone? Guess not then. Keep waving your magic wand (Pen), dearest poet laurette of the Soup! All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:29:00 PM
Very sweet work here. A tinge of mysticism in couplet form. Peace &Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/20/2014 1:29:00 PM
Nette, I especially liked the second half of this one. Love the line about the hawthorns. They have such a romantic imagery for me.
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Date: 7/20/2014 12:10:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poetry crying for publishing! 7 my best, chuck
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:59:00 AM
So peaceful and flowing nette...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/20/2014 9:07:00 AM
Beautiful write Nette...I enjoyed the read...
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Date: 7/20/2014 5:43:00 AM
I get shivers when I read your amazing words Nette the imagery here is sublime. Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/20/2014 3:04:00 AM
Girl...you know you are a queen, right? Look...look at how you paint words...Your last stanza should be immortalized. I LOVE IT! <3 I'm faving this!!!
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Date: 7/20/2014 3:01:00 AM
Special people will always be in our mind and soul. Graceful reminisces from your golden pen, Nette.
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Date: 7/20/2014 1:19:00 AM
Loved ur whispers Nette,, well penned dear//Upma//
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Date: 7/20/2014 1:00:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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