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To Us: By Dane Smith-Johnsen Friendship Strengthens the soul. Brings harmony to life. Understands. Loves. Accepts. And gives. Freely. Carol Brown Challenged me to write a poem in the poetic form "Traditional Cinquain" I hope you enjoy it. Now, I pass this challenge along to Sean Kelly. Smiling!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/9/2009 12:21:00 PM

Hard form there!! Light & Love

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2009 9:15:00 AM

So true Dane.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

James Peranteau

Date: 9/9/2009 7:07:00 AM

What beautiful words Dane,..sounds like what paradice will be like ! Awesome poem ! james

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/9/2009 6:52:00 AM

nicely done, thanks for your welcome comments!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/9/2009 6:03:00 AM

Very nicely done, Dane Ann! This is what friendship is all about. And thanks again for your comments. Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2009 3:38:00 AM

Dane Ann, this is a beautiful Cinquain. Thank you for excepting the challenge.~~~Cheers~~~Smiles~~~. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/9/2009 2:36:00 AM

Well penned , DAS-J , and I will try to emulate your call ....

Brian Strand

Date: 9/9/2009 12:20:00 AM

Like the contrast in lines 1/5 Dane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/8/2009 8:35:00 PM

Great cinquain and wise words. Thanks for your comment on my Troule in the Nursery. Love, Joyce

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/8/2009 8:33:00 PM

well done! Dane!...jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/8/2009 6:08:00 PM

Dane, you have described yourself in this great cinquain. Wonderful work from a woman who truly understands the meaning of friendship. Love you! Carolyn