To Touch the Untouched

She is soothing music, but an unwritten script. A silent movie, but visually, cinematic elegance. Infatuated lyrics thirst to compose onto tones of her curves. Her tongue is a sensual dance, a serenade of sensitive sensations. Her lips a path to pristine passion, her eyes a gateway to heaven. But she is grandeur of purity, a distinction of innocence. Fate must learn patience, in the pursuit of desire.
Simple Musing Silent One 8 March 2020
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Date: 11/3/2020 11:45:00 AM
Beautiful words, enticing Thank you
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Date: 4/26/2020 9:32:00 AM
Soooo good loved this one.
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Date: 3/30/2020 9:47:00 AM
Very original and sensual poem Silent one…loved it!
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Date: 3/25/2020 9:53:00 AM
Silent One, Teases at the edges but remains aloof. I like a poem that escapes gravity, and the trappings of banality. Wonderful write this 'To Touch the Untouched'. -Richard
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Date: 3/20/2020 10:52:00 AM
Hi Silent, a sensual, beautiful write. As always, you use the free-verse form with such wonderful grace. Such a beautiful write my friend. Your words sing within the light. This is a definite Fav, Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/19/2020 7:49:00 PM
This is lovely my friend. So beautifully worded and wonderful emotion and imagery. You are such an amazing writer. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/15/2020 9:05:00 AM
Love this SO, especially the last couplet, since i've been there and done that bit...
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Date: 3/15/2020 7:13:00 AM
Wow. This is so good. I simply love it... It's definitely a fave. You're an amazing writer. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/13/2020 4:16:00 PM
My goodness, this is a serenade of sensitive sensations.... :) very lovely, Silent One.
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Date: 3/12/2020 5:07:00 PM
Of dimensions and possibilities a human called woman and you have displayed the sublime beauty of her nature in so fine a poetry! I'm so glad to read the administration and respect in your words, Silent One.. Best regards and blessings.
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Date: 3/11/2020 11:18:00 PM
Wonderful write with good structure, balance, meaning, imagery, and alliteration!
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Date: 3/11/2020 8:01:00 PM
SO, this dances in the imagination. "a serenade of sensitive sensations" - so lush. A fav for me. Warmly ~ John
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Date: 3/10/2020 11:26:00 AM
You are so right fate must learn patience in the pursuit of desire - a poem of perfection - it follows as the day the night - beautiful write as always Silent One. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/9/2020 6:48:00 PM
what an awesome final couplet there. The whole thing is beautiful with its many metaphors
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Date: 3/9/2020 5:46:00 PM
You are so so wise, and your poetry is worthy to be apprised time and time again, Thank you Silent One for speaking with a mouth full of creation.
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Date: 3/9/2020 1:05:00 PM
What a lovely tribute to women on woman's day which is today--beautiful words. love phyl
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:18:00 AM
What beautiful contrasts! Nothing wrong with admiring the beauty and innocence. I love her tongue is a sensual dance! Fave!!
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Date: 3/9/2020 5:35:00 AM
Thrilling the senses with romance and music. A sensual delight my friend. xxoo
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Date: 3/8/2020 8:19:00 PM
Ethereal linguistic pageantry to swoon any souls’ heart completely and fully, thank you SO well done, kelli.
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Date: 3/8/2020 7:54:00 PM
this is sensual and equally beautiful my friend... so many great lines..."soothing music, unwritten script, her tongue a sensual dance... just all around great write! hugs
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Date: 3/8/2020 7:49:00 PM
This is beautiful, inspiring and sensual. I enjoy reading thoughts like these from your pen. :) You are light. Continue to shine my dear friend. :) Brandy
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Date: 3/8/2020 7:10:00 PM
So lovely! A beautiful tribute to women on womans day. Love it. Hugs
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Date: 3/8/2020 3:42:00 PM
truly a wonderful piece. You speak truth to life. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 3/8/2020 3:28:00 PM
Hello Silent One, I like ,like , like this poem. I agree fate must learn patience in the pure desire. I like those lines. Have a nicde day my friend.
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Date: 3/8/2020 2:51:00 PM
Nice contrast of strong desire with patient self restraint.
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