Silent One Poet Free verse

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To Touch the Untouched

She is soothing music,
but an unwritten script.

A silent movie,
but visually, cinematic elegance.

Infatuated lyrics thirst to
compose onto tones of her curves.

Her tongue is a sensual dance,
a serenade of sensitive sensations.

Her lips a path to pristine passion,
her eyes a gateway to heaven.

But she is grandeur of purity,
a distinction of innocence. 

Fate must learn patience,
in the pursuit of desire.

Simple Musing
Silent One
8 March 2020

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Paul Murray November 3, 2020 at 11:45 AM Beautiful words, enticing Thank you

John Hamilton April 26, 2020 at 9:32 AM Soooo good loved this one.

Charlie Knowlton March 30, 2020 at 9:47 AM Very original and sensual poem Silent one…loved it!

Quoth Theraven March 25, 2020 at 9:53 AM Silent One, Teases at the edges but remains aloof. I like a poem that escapes gravity, and the trappings of banality. Wonderful write this 'To Touch the Untouched'. -Richard

Vladislav Raven March 20, 2020 at 10:52 AM Hi Silent, a sensual, beautiful write. As always, you use the free-verse form with such wonderful grace. Such a beautiful write my friend. Your words sing within the light. This is a definite Fav, Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Judy Ball March 19, 2020 at 7:49 PM This is lovely my friend. So beautifully worded and wonderful emotion and imagery. You are such an amazing writer. Love the pic. God Bless, JB

Harry Horsman March 15, 2020 at 9:05 AM Love this SO, especially the last couplet, since i've been there and done that bit...

Regina Mcintosh March 15, 2020 at 7:13 AM Wow. This is so good. I simply love it... It's definitely a fave. You're an amazing writer. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina

Becca Teagan March 13, 2020 at 4:16 PM My goodness, this is a serenade of sensitive sensations.... :) very lovely, Silent One.

Besma Riabi Dziri March 12, 2020 at 5:07 PM Of dimensions and possibilities a human called woman and you have displayed the sublime beauty of her nature in so fine a poetry! I'm so glad to read the administration and respect in your words, Silent One.. Best regards and blessings.

J. I. Thomas F. March 11, 2020 at 11:18 PM Wonderful write with good structure, balance, meaning, imagery, and alliteration!

John Watt March 11, 2020 at 8:01 PM SO, this dances in the imagination. "a serenade of sensitive sensations" - so lush. A fav for me. Warmly ~ John

Jennifer Proxenos March 10, 2020 at 11:26 AM You are so right fate must learn patience in the pursuit of desire - a poem of perfection - it follows as the day the night - beautiful write as always Silent One. Blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2020 at 6:48 PM what an awesome final couplet there. The whole thing is beautiful with its many metaphors

Mystic Rose Rose March 9, 2020 at 5:46 PM You are so so wise, and your poetry is worthy to be apprised time and time again, Thank you Silent One for speaking with a mouth full of creation.

Phyllis Babcock March 9, 2020 at 1:05 PM What a lovely tribute to women on woman's day which is today--beautiful words. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2020 at 7:18 AM What beautiful contrasts! Nothing wrong with admiring the beauty and innocence. I love her tongue is a sensual dance! Fave!!

Connie Marcum Wong March 9, 2020 at 5:35 AM Thrilling the senses with romance and music. A sensual delight my friend. xxoo

Kelli White March 8, 2020 at 8:19 PM Ethereal linguistic pageantry to swoon any souls’ heart completely and fully, thank you SO well done, kelli.

Sandra Adams March 8, 2020 at 7:54 PM this is sensual and equally beautiful my friend... so many great lines..."soothing music, unwritten script, her tongue a sensual dance... just all around great write! hugs

Brandy Nicole March 8, 2020 at 7:49 PM This is beautiful, inspiring and sensual. I enjoy reading thoughts like these from your pen. :) You are light. Continue to shine my dear friend. :) Brandy

Cecilia Macfarlane March 8, 2020 at 7:10 PM So lovely! A beautiful tribute to women on womans day. Love it. Hugs

David Mchattie March 8, 2020 at 3:42 PM truly a wonderful piece. You speak truth to life. Have a great day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 8, 2020 at 3:28 PM Hello Silent One, I like ,like , like this poem. I agree fate must learn patience in the pure desire. I like those lines. Have a nicde day my friend.

Juliet Ligon March 8, 2020 at 2:51 PM Nice contrast of strong desire with patient self restraint.

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