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She is soothing music, but an unwritten script. A silent movie, but visually, cinematic elegance. Infatuated lyrics thirst to compose onto tones of her curves. Her tongue is a sensual dance, a serenade of sensitive sensations. Her lips a path to pristine passion, her eyes a gateway to heaven. But she is grandeur of purity, a distinction of innocence. Fate must learn patience, in the pursuit of desire. Simple Musing Silent One 8 March 2020

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Paul Murray

Date: 11/3/2020 11:45:00 AM

Beautiful words, enticing Thank you

John Hamilton

Date: 4/26/2020 9:32:00 AM

Soooo good loved this one.

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 3/30/2020 9:47:00 AM

Very original and sensual poem Silent one…loved it!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/25/2020 9:53:00 AM

Silent One, Teases at the edges but remains aloof. I like a poem that escapes gravity, and the trappings of banality. Wonderful write this 'To Touch the Untouched'. -Richard

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/20/2020 10:52:00 AM

Hi Silent, a sensual, beautiful write. As always, you use the free-verse form with such wonderful grace. Such a beautiful write my friend. Your words sing within the light. This is a definite Fav, Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/19/2020 7:49:00 PM

This is lovely my friend. So beautifully worded and wonderful emotion and imagery. You are such an amazing writer. Love the pic. God Bless, JB

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/15/2020 9:05:00 AM

Love this SO, especially the last couplet, since i've been there and done that bit...

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/15/2020 7:13:00 AM

Wow. This is so good. I simply love it... It's definitely a fave. You're an amazing writer. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina

Becca Teagan

Date: 3/13/2020 4:16:00 PM

My goodness, this is a serenade of sensitive sensations.... :) very lovely, Silent One.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/12/2020 5:07:00 PM

Of dimensions and possibilities a human called woman and you have displayed the sublime beauty of her nature in so fine a poetry! I'm so glad to read the administration and respect in your words, Silent One.. Best regards and blessings.

J. I. Thomas F.

Date: 3/11/2020 11:18:00 PM

Wonderful write with good structure, balance, meaning, imagery, and alliteration!

John Watt

Date: 3/11/2020 8:01:00 PM

SO, this dances in the imagination. "a serenade of sensitive sensations" - so lush. A fav for me. Warmly ~ John

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/10/2020 11:26:00 AM

You are so right fate must learn patience in the pursuit of desire - a poem of perfection - it follows as the day the night - beautiful write as always Silent One. Blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2020 6:48:00 PM

what an awesome final couplet there. The whole thing is beautiful with its many metaphors

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/9/2020 5:46:00 PM

You are so so wise, and your poetry is worthy to be apprised time and time again, Thank you Silent One for speaking with a mouth full of creation.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/9/2020 1:05:00 PM

What a lovely tribute to women on woman's day which is today--beautiful words. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/9/2020 7:18:00 AM

What beautiful contrasts! Nothing wrong with admiring the beauty and innocence. I love her tongue is a sensual dance! Fave!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/9/2020 5:35:00 AM

Thrilling the senses with romance and music. A sensual delight my friend. xxoo

Kelli White

Date: 3/8/2020 8:19:00 PM

Ethereal linguistic pageantry to swoon any souls’ heart completely and fully, thank you SO well done, kelli.

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/8/2020 7:54:00 PM

this is sensual and equally beautiful my friend... so many great lines..."soothing music, unwritten script, her tongue a sensual dance... just all around great write! hugs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/8/2020 7:49:00 PM

This is beautiful, inspiring and sensual. I enjoy reading thoughts like these from your pen. :) You are light. Continue to shine my dear friend. :) Brandy

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/8/2020 7:10:00 PM

So lovely! A beautiful tribute to women on womans day. Love it. Hugs

David Mchattie

Date: 3/8/2020 3:42:00 PM

truly a wonderful piece. You speak truth to life. Have a great day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/8/2020 3:28:00 PM

Hello Silent One, I like ,like , like this poem. I agree fate must learn patience in the pure desire. I like those lines. Have a nicde day my friend.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/8/2020 2:51:00 PM

Nice contrast of strong desire with patient self restraint.