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To the One I Lost Twice

It was a life time ago,
                                                   
or maybe two lives ago.
                                               
Every Saturday or so,
                                                   
I went skating at a roller rink.
                                       
Going around and round,
                                               
on that old wooden rink floor.
                       
Our skates seemed to just hum,
                     
as we talked and laughed.
                                             
One day this boy a couple of years older,
   
ask to hold my hand.
                                                   
I said yes,
                                                                   
our skates took off in flames.
                                         
Every Saturday after that,
                                             
we skated the hours away.
                                           
One day he asked for my for phone number,
 
I gave it to him.
                                                           
Now we could talk during the week,
                               
what a thrill that was.
                                                 
It all ended the day we moved,
                                       
no more Saturday skating for us.
                                   
Ten years later,
                                                             
I read he had made a movie,
                                         
I tracked down his phone number.
                                   
When I called the phone number,
                                   
to my shock he answered.
                                             
Do you remember the eight year old,
                             
the girl you skated with every Saturday.
                       
Yes oh yes,
                                                                   
came back to me.
                                                         
We wished each other well,
                                             
knowing our lives had changed.
                                   
The old wooden rink floor may have been the same,
but we had grown and changed.
                                     
We were not the same kids skating round and round,
     
we would be lost forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/17/2023 12:03:00 PM
Time changes us--lovely love story, Paula. Congrats on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. Yes, time can change us. Cannot undo the past. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/17/2023 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Paula. Your writing is so lovely
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 12:06:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found this to be a lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/17/2023 11:19:00 AM
"3 Place" ~ To The One I Lost Twice ~ True Story ~ Date Written:7/12/2023
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Date: 8/17/2023 9:31:00 AM
Nice sentimental story. Nice winner.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2023 11:19:00 AM
Thanks for your note. I did not know this had won. Glad you found this to be a nice sentimental story/nice winner. You put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/15/2023 9:09:00 AM
love this touching write
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:14:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found this to be a touching write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/14/2023 4:45:00 PM
Isn't it strange how coinsedences happen from time to time. I liked roller skating a lot until about 20, then my interest changed. Thanks for the walk down memory lane, Paula. Hugs, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:13:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my true write and the walk down memory lane. Good Times... Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/14/2023 2:03:00 PM
How very precious Paula, sad, but blissfully joyful in memory. Those wonderful old wooden roller rinks were such a joy, I too have many happy memories of skating. If only older age would be kinder, I would love to be so free again! Your poem is so precious <3
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:11:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Those were great days skating away the afternoons. Today, I would kill myself. Hahahaha... Time/life made changes for us. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/13/2023 9:24:00 PM
Special moments of tender love, Paula, sad that time changes as we grow up...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2023 1:08:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my write. Time changes everything in life. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/13/2023 8:10:00 AM
Wow. What a story Paula! Those are special memories skating at the rink. Sad about a loss twice. Well written. I hope you have a nice day :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2023 9:01:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my true write. Over the years I have thought about us from time to time and how we skated the days away. Guess we had our time and life made changes for us. Have a blessed day writing away................
Date: 7/12/2023 12:40:00 PM
That’s lovely Paula, young love is so sweet, a memory to cherish and keep… Blessings ~ Belle
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2023 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this true write. One never knows where life will take them. Have a blessed day writing away............
Date: 7/12/2023 12:25:00 PM
To The One I Lost Twice ~True Story ~ Date Written:7/12/2023
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