To the One I Long For- Collaboration With Lu Loo
"TO THE ONE I LONG FOR"
Written by: Luloo & Edward Ibeh
How do you feel without me
near, my darling angel?
Please do answer me this
without lying to yourself
Does loneliness burn like acid?
Do I steal away a chunky piece of you
each time we bid goodbye?
Are you alright by your lonesome
or does a part of you die...
until you're back in my arms?
When I'm far out of sight
how intensely do you pine for me?
Do you feel strong and sturdy
like the pillars carrying the weight of a roof?
O, how do you feel without me near…
Cease the night as I endorse you,
trying not to forget the delight of
your light last night.
You shined as if you knew I was
gazing at you with intense desire.
I shall never release this passion;
I would never allow you to feel
abandoned.
For I would give you the universe,
and you would give me, well…
you-
in a perfect world.
I have been forsaken and I
sit and wonder if you feel the same.
There is no lie you could say
that could make me stay away;
no answer could you give that
could erase this vehement
fervor of emotional adoration
for you.
My darling angel, I wonder,
how do you feel without me near?
I pine intensely awaiting your
longing to appear.
Date written: 09/28/2019
*Collaborating with a truly remarkable poetess like you was such a pleasure, Lu Loo:-) Many thanks for the wonderful opportunity! Blessings, my friend*
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