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"TO THE ONE I LONG FOR" Written by: Luloo & Edward Ibeh How do you feel without me near, my darling angel? Please do answer me this without lying to yourself Does loneliness burn like acid? Do I steal away a chunky piece of you each time we bid goodbye? Are you alright by your lonesome or does a part of you die... until you're back in my arms? When I'm far out of sight how intensely do you pine for me? Do you feel strong and sturdy like the pillars carrying the weight of a roof? O, how do you feel without me near… Cease the night as I endorse you, trying not to forget the delight of your light last night. You shined as if you knew I was gazing at you with intense desire. I shall never release this passion; I would never allow you to feel abandoned. For I would give you the universe, and you would give me, well… you- in a perfect world. I have been forsaken and I sit and wonder if you feel the same. There is no lie you could say that could make me stay away; no answer could you give that could erase this vehement fervor of emotional adoration for you. My darling angel, I wonder, how do you feel without me near? I pine intensely awaiting your longing to appear. Date written: 09/28/2019 *Collaborating with a truly remarkable poetess like you was such a pleasure, Lu Loo:-) Many thanks for the wonderful opportunity! Blessings, my friend*

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Date: 9/29/2019 3:28:00 PM
there is no one else I'd rather write with than you....be blessed and thank you once again :)-luloo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/29/2019 3:43:00 PM
Aww, anytime, Lu Loo:-) Have a blessed Sunday...
Date: 9/29/2019 8:36:00 AM
Very romantic..love and longing in every verse..you blended your styles beautifully to create this splendid poem..kudos to you Edward and Lu Loo.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/29/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay!:-) Most obliged.

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