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To Run For the Tide

I feel I must always Run for the tide Always trying to catch up Holding on deep inside Life’s slipping away though I’m running faster Always feeling I’m Fleeing from certain disaster I run for the tide So I’m not left alone To be able to keep The sweet life that I’ve known Seems that peace is elusive And there’s no time to rest That it’s not good enough Though I’m doing by best I run for the tide Can’t give up while I’m able Can’t stop wanting to eat While there’s life on the table

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/24/2018 3:45:00 PM
For sure. Live it to the last! Great read!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/24/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Joe !!
Date: 1/17/2018 7:26:00 AM
Excellent read, Mike! The struggle we all face! Blessings of peace.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/17/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Kim, and blessings to you as well xxxooo and peace!
Date: 1/17/2018 12:00:00 AM
Excellent poem here.. looks like you're doing jut fine..taking a deep breath after this one! I love the last stanza, wraps it all up very nicely. Keep holding on! Always, Laura
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/17/2018 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Laura, I appreciate your kind comments !@!!
Date: 1/16/2018 4:50:00 PM
Beautifully poetic and I can relate Mike life can be so challenging - I am determine to keep on running with the tide and not get swamped and bogged down with the complexities of life:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/16/2018 8:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, keep on running and win!!! Xxoo
Date: 1/16/2018 1:52:00 PM
I can understand this and you have written it so well Mike. Life is very challenging. I hope your day is going well :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/16/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thanks and likewise to you, Miss Heidi xxoo
Date: 1/16/2018 11:21:00 AM
A powerful message in your poem Mike..you are right, we must do all we can to catch that tide while we are able..well written!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/16/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your thoughts!!
Date: 1/16/2018 9:23:00 AM
Love this, the rhyme and the flow, and the wonderful message, carpe diem!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/16/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Maureen,xxoo
Date: 1/16/2018 9:12:00 AM
Interesting poem of trying to gain something, but always missing out or not getting what you really want.. cant become repetitive and disheartening... never give up my friend...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/16/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, I haven't given up as yet. Life is sometimes a challenge for all of us !!

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