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To Rum

Tomorrow still trapped; in time, in this place
Two steps to the good, yet not enough
For the Black Ghost tugs by the 'ruff
A relentless cold wind stings my face
Try and break free, held tight is his grasp
Slowly wear down the brass of the clasp

To the left, nothing seen just the nights thickness
To the right, a dim light leading nowhere
Where's the moon and its glowing glare?
After some Rum, stumbling in drunkenness
A trip, then a tumble; and flat on the ground
A cry for help. No ones to be found

Beads of sweat tread my brow. Cheeks a deep red
A piercing sharp pain constricts my heart
Awakened suddenly, stuck in the dark
Turning to the side, rolling off that cursed bed
A dream, just a dream; then a sigh of relief
My mental state stricken by nothing but sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 5, 2016 at 8:30 PM
William Bracamonte, awesome poem. LINDA
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August 21, 2015 at 2:35 AM
William, I like this very much **SKAT**
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January 21, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us William. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
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January 20, 2011 at 8:48 PM
You have described the excess imbibing of rum and its common consequences quite well in your words and rhyming. Just check the second line in your last verse. I believe you wanted to type "constricts" instead of "contricts". Everything else appears well.
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