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To Rum

Tomorrow still trapped; in time, in this place Two steps to the good, yet not enough For the Black Ghost tugs by the 'ruff A relentless cold wind stings my face Try and break free, held tight is his grasp Slowly wear down the brass of the clasp To the left, nothing seen just the nights thickness To the right, a dim light leading nowhere Where's the moon and its glowing glare? After some Rum, stumbling in drunkenness A trip, then a tumble; and flat on the ground A cry for help. No ones to be found Beads of sweat tread my brow. Cheeks a deep red A piercing sharp pain constricts my heart Awakened suddenly, stuck in the dark Turning to the side, rolling off that cursed bed A dream, just a dream; then a sigh of relief My mental state stricken by nothing but sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/5/2016 8:30:00 PM
William Bracamonte, awesome poem. LINDA
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Date: 8/21/2015 2:35:00 AM
William, I like this very much **SKAT**
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:07:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us William. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:48:00 PM
You have described the excess imbibing of rum and its common consequences quite well in your words and rhyming. Just check the second line in your last verse. I believe you wanted to type "constricts" instead of "contricts". Everything else appears well.
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