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To Paint the Skies

. 1~ She walked ~ faint footprints left behind A maiden's journey~a silent remind of long-ago days in deerskin dress A shelter of skins won under duress She walks with wind along the Plains Feeds quail and birds the corn remains. Her voice, an octave or two below returns their music as she sows She prays for peace and for the rain She wants her lover back again and corn that reaches up so high it paints the blue across the sky. She wants those days before men came took their children, killed their game She wants the breezes in her hair and mourns those days of little care. ~2~ An archaeologist~grave robber, some say Yet before each dig, she takes time to pray For this is where people lived and died Birthed their young, laughed and cried She finds the footprints under deep sand Preserved for years by Nature's hand And, next to them, some bits of corn A wonderous find, and yet she's torn. Put on display for tourists to stare hallowed ground ruined, many despair. A tug at her heart, the call of a bird~ She decides to leave site undisturbed. As she moves on, she throws some corn For quail and birds to feast upon Perhaps nuggets will one day rise ~ As stalks so high they paint the skies.

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Date: 1/6/2022 2:41:00 PM
Moved me to tears. Wonderful poetry, Ann. ~Eric
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/11/2022 8:45:00 AM
Dear Eric, Thank you for being moved by my poem. That is the greatest compliment of all! The Native Americans have so much wisdom about Mother Earth to offer. We need to listen :)
Date: 1/5/2022 10:47:00 PM
Wondrously offered to Hero-Victims, the Silenced Americans, First Nations. Grandfather Spirit bless us all. The opening reminded me of the carefree Pocohontas,but Eastern Woodlands & Plains "Indians" had different demons. The former also celebrate 3 Sisters, foods. Thk U
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/6/2022 10:43:00 AM
Dear Anil, I'm thrilled that a true daughter of the Sun (is that correct?) read my poem! I don't know much about the Plains Native Americans, my focus in art and poetry has been the SW Native Americans All of you have been treated horribly by our gov. We should listen to you if we want to save Mother Earth! Thank you for your comments, Anil.
Date: 1/2/2022 10:00:00 PM
Oh Ann, this is an excellent! I have always felt a cultural affinity to the way the ancient native American people lived. They cared and respected the earth and all living creatures. A truly beautiful poem and another fav for me. Hugs to you my friend :-)
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/3/2022 10:30:00 AM
Dear Anne, Thank you so much for your wonderful comments! I painted mainly Hopi, Navajo, Zuni maidens and children~my favorite:) and learned a lot about their different cultures. I doubt it's taught in schools ~ so sad. 2022 (eek!) Big hugs back~stay safe!
Date: 1/2/2022 12:06:00 AM
Really deep and an interesting perspective, Ann:) brilliant writing:) happy new year:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/2/2022 9:01:00 AM
Dear Jo, Thank you so much for your kind comments and for stopping by :)
Date: 12/30/2021 4:39:00 PM
A remarkable tribute to the Native people, of America. How beautifully you have expressed the depth of reverence. A breathless write. Happy New Year, Paulette
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/31/2021 10:04:00 AM
Dear Paulette, Thank you so much for your beautiful comments! We should revere the Native Americans. They can teach us many things. I hope your New Year is happy. too :)
Date: 12/29/2021 1:08:00 PM
Beautiful and symbolic, Ann
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/29/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. A son and I exchanged books recently and his ~ by Preston and Childs ~ have an archaeologist as the heroine. They have a lot of research in them, and so interesting.
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/29/2021 2:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. A son and I exchanged books recently and his ~ by Preston and Childs ~ have an archaeologist as the heroine. They have a lot of research in them, and so interesting.
Date: 12/29/2021 11:20:00 AM
Traditional Apaches never touch anything which may have belonged to a deceased person, as to do so would disturb its spirit in its new life, so Apache lands are littered with untouched "history" that delights "archaeologists" but appalls Tribal elders and police. "Walk in beauty" is a Navajo concept. Enjoyed, Ann!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/30/2021 11:10:00 AM
Apaches also destroy personal possessions so they can not be used by anyone else to interrupt the new life of the deceased. Apaches believe that when a baby cries, it is caused by previous loved ones mourning their loss . . . .
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/29/2021 2:12:00 PM
That's interesting, Rico. I recently read the Mimbres "killed" a pot before putting it in a grave with a person. They punched a hole in the bottom to release the pot's spirit to go with the deceased person to the underworld.
Date: 12/28/2021 11:10:00 AM
How poignant, the connection of these two women and how they each sought to repair the wounds left by rougher hands, this is mesmerizing~
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Date: 12/28/2021 12:57:00 PM
It's interesting the things that inspire us ~ I read a fact/fiction book last week about an archaeologist who solves a murder, but it had so many details about a ghost town, old mine, Padre's gold treasure in New Mexico that got my thoughts going. The poem is nothing like the book, more about Plains Indians, but they all suffered. And I wanted an unselfish archaeologist ~ not hungry for another paper to publish. Thank you, Michelle, for letting me know it works.

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