To Much

Flowing like a river
 Down her soft skin 
She sits in her room 
A knife laying on the bed
Her door locked 
Mother beating on the door 
She drifts into darkness
Never to wake again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 8, 2013 at 4:18 PM
wow, this is deep,,, the blood flowing down the skin...Cara, i hope this is not you and your thoughts... it's a good poem, but a bad choice of suicide. very sad..very sad...LINDA
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