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To Men : Is This Love

At height of passion he said I love you Without meaning the word of it When she was sick, it was life as usual for him Up in the morning off to office He would not take leave for help her in her work Even when he had leave, he would only demand from her Food and service When she was in pain he merely smiled He never show true concern It was as if she was a machine, a robot Is this love? tell me! Why are men so heartless? If you are heartless at least don't talk of love It stings more than actions! Date: 11/23/2020 Note: Fictional

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Silent One

Date: 11/23/2020 9:40:00 AM

Its more in subcontinent than here in the west, but yes, there are men who dont appreciate wives, but there are also women who dont appreciate their husbands

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/23/2020 10:27:00 PM

Don't know about west but many Indian wives would agree with what I wrote. You are right about many good husband's and bad wives. Have seen many such cases. This was meant for bad males, In case there are heartless males reading this I just wanted them to understand they are wrong. Thanks for taking time out to comment. Have a great day ahead. Regards Rama.

Silent One

Date: 11/23/2020 6:47:00 AM

Men have difficulty expressing their emotions, but this does not seem like love..

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/23/2020 8:41:00 AM

It is not and unfortunately many men are like this. I understand men have difficulty expressing their emotions but they can show it in actions. Who wants flowery language but atleast help your wife when she needs it. Listen when she wants to say something. Men take wife for granted. I can do whatever I want and get away with it because I earn. How many care for emotions of wife, her happiness?