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To Make Your Day

I remember all those times When I tried to figure out some rhymes To try to make them all make sense So, I'll try again, dear ladies and gents I'll write my thoughts as they come to mind And try to leave my worst behind Perhaps my finest I vow renew To try my best to flatter you Perhaps you're down or feeling ill This poem I pen- hope, gives you will And lifts your soul, and shines a light To make your days, again...be bright

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Valsa George

Date: 11/1/2022 11:32:00 PM

Appreciate your intention, dear Charlie. If one can light the mind of those who are weary through a word or a kind gesture, it is a great thing . You have really suceeded in your attempt, my friend !

Speaks Volumes

Date: 10/25/2022 3:50:00 PM

Charlie, you succeeded ! I just finished scrubbing my kitchen from top to toe and was really in need of rest. Your uplifting poem was like a breath of fresh air. I enjoyed it,, thank you so much. When I have more time I will read more of your pieces with eager anticipation.,, Wendy

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:05:00 PM

Wendy, thank you so much for commenting on this poem. So happy it lifted your spirits when time of need. So nice to hear from you...I will also be stopping by to read more of your poetry. :) Charlie

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/24/2022 11:08:00 AM

That is a fine attitude for a poet to have, Charles, and a fitting goal to strive for. This piece certainly brightened a rather gloomy Monday morning for me.

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:07:00 PM

Thank you, Jim. Glad to hear it brightened your Monday. Hopefully the rest of this week goes well for you. All the best...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/23/2022 6:21:00 PM

Love the cheerful tone and message, my friend. Cheers (even without beers), gw

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:08:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon...but hey, need the beers (lol)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/21/2022 6:25:00 AM

How wonderful to recall those who cannot write for some reason. Not everyone here, chooses to write or comment ALL day…. Families, children, gardening! There are many things to do …and the Bible and church friends. Oh, and reading great poets! Huggs,Pangie

Susan Lawrence

Date: 10/20/2022 7:22:00 PM

Love this. Love your positive energy and soul expression Charles ! Cheers, Susan :)

Charles Messina
Date: 10/25/2022 5:09:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Positive energy all the way :) Cheers- Charlie :)

Ken Rone

Date: 10/20/2022 4:23:00 PM

I think you nailed it Charles. Your hope is something all we Soupers strive for. I'm sure it brought many a smile. Best - Ken

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2022 1:14:00 PM

so cute and positive! Love it, Charlie

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/19/2022 11:03:00 AM

Hello Charles, this poem has brightened my day. It is dull outside it will rain then snow today. Enjoy yur day my friend.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/19/2022 8:37:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie. You do make our day with this delightful poem about lifting our spirits. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Write on!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2022 7:10:00 AM

Charlie, you write such beautiful poems. Inspirational and encouraging. I found the atmosphere of your poem to be delightful.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/19/2022 6:33:00 AM

Inspiring and uplifting. Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Charlie.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2022 5:54:00 AM

How I wish I could rhyme like you. Unfortunately, Maltese is not easy to help in this matter.

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2022 5:20:00 AM

What a lovely sweet uplifting poem! Your work is done Charlie!! Hehe …Enjoyed….Debx

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/19/2022 4:59:00 AM

Thank you Charlie for your kind words! Often I would like to write yet my muse sleeps!! Hep will awaken when he's ready!! Happy Wednesday!!

Charles Messina
Date: 10/19/2022 5:04:00 AM

I know the feeling…thanks Mike. Happy Wednesday