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To Join With Gold

What is it, to be a broken thing? A glass, carelessly chipped on the edge of the sink; or a plate, smashed in anger. To be placed at the back of the kitchen shelf and forgotten, or swept out with the trash on Tuesday. Tender branches are ripped asunder all the time by force of wind and storm; made sudden stranger to the trunk and roots that once were all they knew. But humans are familiar; we can be damaged from misuse, too. Hearts and minds are fragile things, even more than brittle bones. "Careful" we whisper, ashamed, "do not cut yourself on my sharp ends" We bandage and hide our wounds away, terrified for the world to see. But the ancient Japanese knew that a shattered bowl can become art, if you accept and honor each crack and scar; lovingly traced with brilliant gold. An orphaned tree limb, itself, could become the paper bearing tender words to a lover far away; and so, find a way to fly. One day will we see: that we are not ruined, just matter reformed? Scar tissue knit finally over bone; careful stitchwork wrought by loving hands. Composed of healed fractures and patchwork hearts: forever changed but beautiful in newfound strength; capable of things never dreamt of before. Not whole, but something more.

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Date: 3/15/2024 2:48:00 AM
This is so beautiful, your words touched me deeply. You are so very wise I cannot help but wonder what brought about this brilliant philosophy of life that saves you. Thank you for sharing your gifted pen, Vie
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Date: 12/10/2023 9:44:00 PM
This poem is a juxtaposition on what we have always thought, but I like this innovation . The verses progressed from a problem to a new look at trauma to ending that was almost relieving. It holds a reader's attention.
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Date: 11/18/2023 8:48:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful A.M.
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Date: 11/18/2023 2:25:00 AM
Humans and things, being brought together in a good poem, A.M. Thank you.
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Date: 11/16/2023 4:56:00 PM
Your poetry is so well crafted, so developed with imagery that fills the soul and touches all the senses. I really enjoy your work. Keep it coming! Paulette
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Date: 11/16/2023 9:23:00 AM
Such a profound poetry you have written here! I loved reading it! Thank you for a beautiful message! "A shattered bowl can become art if you accept and honor each crack and scar" How true!! Loved this!
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Date: 11/16/2023 2:54:00 AM
Loved the visuals with this poem! You continue to excite my senses with your visual words.
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Date: 11/15/2023 6:21:00 PM
Enjoyed this writing and as a child with candy an wanting more! Patrick
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:33:00 AM
Wonderful ideas penned in this one. Yes, we can become as long as there is breath. We can heal and become a strong person who can influence another to become a better person. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Date: 10/8/2023 2:01:00 PM
Just a great poem! Deep and meaningful with a wonderful, positive message too. Cheers - Gary
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