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To Her With Love

Daylight ends softly splayed on meadow green Invites the evening to heart's final choice I'll taste sweet wine from a love's cup unseen Bequeath my heart a lover's need I'll voice The red soothing sun bows to the moon's light To reveal a silhouette of whom I seek Sitting in pose her heart filled with delight Soon to hear music from soft words I'll speak To approach my love with a joy within And feel the warm rush of pulsating veins On bended knee an innocence begins With orchid and ring my hand contains Silent eyes look up on beauty I see To ask a question, Will you marry me? contest.. Will you marry me 9/18/14

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Date: 9/29/2014 7:23:00 PM
so romantic, words flow from your heart, if i were single and you read that to me I would have fainted in your arms with bliss hugs
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful proposal Frederic. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:19:00 AM
- Frederic, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:16:00 AM
Nice romantic proposal. congrats on the win, Frederic
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Date: 9/27/2014 12:40:00 PM
I just love this proposal Frederic. It so beautifully written and so touching. Congratulations on your well deserved high placed win. I will fav this one.
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thank You for entering my contest!
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:13:00 AM
Such a sweet proposal Frederic! Trust u never failed to fascinate if it were romance! Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:04:00 AM
many congrats on your top spot Fredric- great to read this one again:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/25/2014 10:44:00 AM
Very nice sonnet! I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest! Xxxx D.
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Date: 9/22/2014 7:33:00 PM
Beautiful. Is it YOUR story?? Wait till you see mine. Total opposite of this one!
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Date: 9/19/2014 2:22:00 AM
I like this romantic romantic expressions to taste the sweet wine from love's cup and that too unseen, You always excel in your sonnets, Frederic
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Date: 9/18/2014 1:38:00 PM
- So tenderly you for sharing your beautiful words - Romantic poem, Frederic! - (Yes, in my next life :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/18/2014 9:20:00 PM
thank you Anne for your kindness
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/18/2014 9:13:00 PM
thank you nette, my poetic friend
Date: 9/18/2014 1:29:00 PM
when it comes to subtle imagery, you simply bring it on, frederick.. no one can deny this proposal.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/18/2014 9:21:00 PM
thank you nette, my poetic friend
Date: 9/18/2014 11:18:00 AM
An orchid and a ring so romantic - woohooo I'd be there if I wasn't married - I adore orchids:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/18/2014 9:23:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I'd be there too if I wasn't married

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