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my cat has left me please peter . . . slow the gate opens ___________________________ June 16, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/to heaven-13 Copyright Protected, ID 18-1021-442-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, MagiCicada 13 sponsor, Maureen McGreavy Third Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2018 12:28:00 PM

Oh Constance. This was such a lovely way to keep your cat's memory alive. Love this and the picture too. Congrats.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/24/2018 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2018 3:46:00 PM

Such a lovely image, BW. Congrats on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/21/2018 10:41:00 AM

And now I get to see the picture. This one wooed with sweetness. I read you lost her respcently, my condolences dear poetess. <3 xomo!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/21/2018 8:03:00 AM

So sweet and moving! CONGRATS, Constance. Janice

Roy Pett

Date: 6/16/2018 4:28:00 PM

Beautifully written though very sad haiku , so sorry for your loss, our pets become family and to lose them is heartbreaking.

Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2018 9:19:00 AM

Roy thanks for your compassion. It is a difficult time. I miss her meow.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/16/2018 11:51:00 AM

aww Constance my heart breaks for you at the loss of your treasured pet:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 6/16/2018 12:07:00 PM

Jan, I am shattered by the death of my beautiful girl. She was a treasure for 20 long years. I was blessed to have her so long. Thanks for your thoughtful comment.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/16/2018 9:28:00 AM

I hope this is not true, Constance! If so, I am sorry for your loss. I know how much company a pet can be.

Constance La France
Date: 6/16/2018 12:04:00 PM

Daniel, it is true I lost my beloved cat on Monday of this week, she died in my arms. Thanks for your kind words.