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To Get Away

I need to get away. Somewhere to play, the ocean or the bay. A nice place to stay, a little out of the way. A price, that I can pay. I can enjoy the day, and do it my way. Brought a towel to lay, in the sun, catch a ray. A little later, I just may, chill out, you might say. And that would be okay. I now have a plan, YAY!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2019 1:02:00 PM

:) This is a delight, Sandra, and you made great use of the monorhyme form to plan your vacation. Let's try the Caribbean! Hugs, Carolyn

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/7/2019 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn, it was fun to try this type of poem. The Caribbean it is!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2019 5:00:00 PM

very cute monorhyming . The AY and the other long vowels are always great for this kind of rhyming!

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/7/2019 3:04:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, a fun one to write. Glad that I did it in true form.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/6/2019 3:52:00 PM

If there is one rhyme I love the most it is a monorhyme, especially one that truly is a monorhyme as this one is. It has a jazzy sing-songy way about it, and it portrays how we all often feel. I was thinking "take me! take me!" but then it would not really be a get away, would it Sandra?

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/6/2019 4:44:00 PM

Thank you, Caren. This is my first monorhyme, was hoping for feedback, wondering if it met criteria. Thank you for doing that for me. Get away options are open...