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To Flee

Every morning, I flee the toxic effervescence of cities, Where no one controls his thought, that of the birds Where people mate in the thousands, Without knowing what they will do, without love, Where one is more tired in a day than in a week, I flee with my reason, I flee with my heart, With the determination of a South American poet, I flee the violence of all hypocritical looks, That of thoughts, insults behind imaginary masks, I flee the toxic effervescence of the city, Where Mexican jaguars are caged, Where trees are slaves of men, And artists slaves to appearances, This city that flees the landscapes like ferocious animals, She flees the poetry and calm of the centuries-old gardens, This city flees Berlioz and Sibelius, Debussy, Dante, To worship David Bowie or Prince, The new gods of electricity, pop art, This city abandons the mechanics of rivers, to poets alone, I flee the bustle of the cities, By love, by wisdom, Out of love for a happy princess, Waiting for me to sing the renewal of the indomitable rivers, And I am at last away from the deafening mirrors. Beauty.

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Date: 5/1/2024 9:13:00 AM
Well, I hope that the poet in you finds much about which to write. I have always lived rural, so I don't know about cities except what I see on TV and that is all bad. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 9/27/2023 1:20:00 PM
That's kind of interesting you mention fleeiing with the determination of a South American poet. Do you find South Americans to be more determined? Love the overall message of your poem, Yann
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/27/2023 4:43:00 PM
Not so sure, Andrea, but they have determination too i think, like Neruda, or Marquez, it was more an "idea" than a truth, thanks for sharing your friendly opinion, have a nice day
Date: 9/27/2023 4:42:00 AM
A fantastic write my friend. We are all running from something in our search for inner peace. "Insults behind imaginary masks" and "artist slaves to appearance" are some brilliant words. Well done, Yann.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/27/2023 4:45:00 PM
thanks Jerry, for the kind words and support, enjoyed your enthousiasm and friendly comment, so appreciated have a nice day
Date: 9/27/2023 1:03:00 AM
How I agree with you. I shun crowds, who live aimlessly. Give me the quiet of my house always.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/27/2023 4:47:00 PM
aimelessly, so true word, Victor, thanks for the support, first thing i do, at morning is to leave the town with my car, but gas become expensive in France have a nce day
Date: 9/26/2023 10:49:00 PM
We all crave for peace and calm and prefer the serenity of suburbs to the noise and artificial pomp and pageantry of the cities. You have shared the thoughts of many..... to flee from the hustle and bustle of deadening city life. Enjoyed your poem.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/27/2023 4:49:00 PM
thanks a lot Valsa, for the kind words, i have to learn from your perfect english, thanks for the support and relevance, fleeing the town is a necessity at morning have a sweet day-
Date: 9/26/2023 9:23:00 PM
Many a heart yearns for the peace, tranquility and beauty of the country. Love the last four lines of your amazing poem. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/27/2023 4:51:00 PM
thanks evelyn, for the kind message and words, they are comforting my opinion and desires have a nice day
Date: 9/26/2023 4:45:00 PM
Ahhh to flee or not to flee... that is the eternal question which demands a definitive answer. I'm stumped
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/27/2023 4:52:00 PM
love the way, you manage the poem, "a definitive answer," will try as soon i can, take care poet
Date: 9/26/2023 4:12:00 PM
An amazing write, Yann! I'm delighted you fled with both your reason and heart out of the bustle of the cities by love and wisdom. Powerful words....and out of the love for a happy princess. Inspirational! You're bold and courageous. Reminds me a little bit of the story of Jonathan Livingston Seagull. Fabulous.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 9/27/2023 4:55:00 PM
Thanks sara, for the precious words and support, i read twice your delicious comment and enlightning opinion have a nice day, thank you very much

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