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To Fall Victim of Beauty

Captivating eyes staring of pleasure where time has slowed and infinity has gathered With delicacy and brazen image I crawl to the virgin canvas shadowed and brightly lit for a moment I am gone..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/15/2011 10:32:00 PM
i love the name of this poem and im glad you shared it with us because this poem is now one of my favorite ones today :) merry christmas :)
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:49:00 PM
Mysterious ending. This is really nice, evocative, Rick!
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Date: 12/14/2011 8:31:00 PM
Rick...Love the title and love the poem!
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Date: 12/14/2011 12:33:00 PM
Wow! Amazingly provocative poem, Rick. Your poem made me think of a painter looking at a "virgin canvas" and trying to capture the beauty of those "captivating eyes." A poet can do the same thing with imagery. Very fine poetry, my friend. Have a Merry Christmas, Rick! Love, Carolyn
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