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To Exist In the Ether

I run scared Scared not of my shadow But that I have none Brought into existence Momentarily Only to evaporate I have no music Only placing words together Soundlessly

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/13/2023 12:07:00 AM

Captivating. Each stanza a profound statement, D style ! Yes I love it. Read it twice to be sure, but yes I definitely love it. All the best SP

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/13/2023 12:12:00 AM

Thanks SV, I wrote this one really quickly but I think I need to work on feelings of validity and existence - it's always eluded me x

John Oldham

Date: 9/12/2023 5:18:00 PM

Really liked this, DD. It speaks well - Best, John

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/12/2023 10:54:00 PM

Thank you John, I value your support

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/12/2023 4:04:00 PM

short and .wonderful, all is said and great, thanks yann

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/12/2023 10:54:00 PM

Thank you Yann, I appreciate your kind words

John Lawless

Date: 9/12/2023 3:08:00 PM

these are the monsters that will keep me up tonight. Thanks a lot DD. These are also somewhat intriguing Senryu

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/12/2023 3:11:00 PM

That's a trend you've pinned on me twice - I'll start working on a lullaby maybe... thank you for taking a look John, always appreciate a comment from yourself

Paige Hind

Date: 9/12/2023 1:49:00 PM

Beautiful writing!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/12/2023 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Paige, this one just appeared as I'd finished the last contest poem. I appreciate your support x