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To Be With You - Collaboration With Darren White:

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I would trade it all in for your gentle smile, The touch of your hand, let's walk for a while, Let our passions burn in a loving embrace, Allowing love to roam, both follow in chase. With eyes closed, I hear you I feel you so near, Your voice, your sweet eyes, make my day and night clear, Hold me so tight to you, embrace, don't let go, Until we're one person, for I love you so. I would trade my fortune, my house, all for you, I would sell my car, my whole land, my shoes too, Make me wake up to you, tonight, every night, Make me so happy, make my darkness all light. Sleep in my heart, love in my arms, ease my mind, Be real like you used to, don't leave me behind. (11 syllables per line)

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/20/2017 9:29:00 AM

A very romantic sonnet, WW and Darren. You both showed a flair for engaging the heart w/such tender prose. The Romantic Warrior bequeaths a 7 to ye both. Love always.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 3/19/2017 3:23:00 PM

Congratulations to both of you. A really great Sonnet. // +7

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/18/2017 9:01:00 AM

I love that this jewel of a romantic sonnet is in 11 syllable verses. As I once wrote often in 11 syllable verses back in the early 70's, finding it gave bit more freedom , especially in sonnets. A7 and a fav.. great work my friends!

White Wolf
Date: 3/18/2017 6:44:00 PM

Thank you very much, Robert. /|\

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 3/17/2017 9:29:00 PM

Simply gorgeous!!! Beautifully written my friends <3

White Wolf
Date: 3/17/2017 9:37:00 PM

G'day there, Claudia! How have you been? Thank you my friend /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/17/2017 8:16:00 AM

When two loving hearts sing we have to listen to the melody they produce! Excellent collaboration. A seven to each!

White Wolf
Date: 3/17/2017 8:38:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios, I know light cannot exist without darkness, but in the eyes of the initiate, there is only light! /|\

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/17/2017 8:04:00 AM

Wolf & Darren, these words of love, rise above the constant bombardment of criticism and conflict, providing comfort and contentment. 7 My best to you, chuck

White Wolf
Date: 3/17/2017 8:36:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind words, Chuck /|\

Darren White

Date: 3/16/2017 11:55:00 PM

I really loved crafting this poem together with you, I like the result very much.

Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 12:45:00 AM

Morning Budgie :) And yeah, I'll find you some nice lines and send em your way!

White Wolf
Date: 3/17/2017 12:34:00 AM

Your turn to post the next adventure together! /|\

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/15/2017 7:28:00 PM

Hello White Wolf and yes Darren too. To you both this is marvelous and very smooth not to mention romantic. And yes what a statement "to be with you" so much thought there within those words. Congratulations to both of you in working together to create timeless poetry. Well done entirely.

White Wolf
Date: 3/16/2017 8:39:00 PM

Darren must get most of the credit for this poem! Thank you very much, Lisa /|\