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To Be With Her That Gave My Life Such Bliss

To Be With Her That Gave My Life Such Bliss When the greatest treasure has been lost Every dawn seems to be cold with chilling frost The rising sun pales and laughs loudly at me As I sit here in lonely chains drowning in this sea And mind cannot conquer these massive blues I long, I cry to walk back before tragic news To see, to touch, to have again her kiss To be with her that gave my life such bliss. Robert J. Lindley, 6-04-2022 Rhyme Note: Depths of sorrows that engulf the dying soul No more happy tomorrows, world sets its toll Life now cuts with its most vicious blades And in that dark abyss, hopelessness parades...

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Date: 6/11/2022 1:31:00 PM
A "Beautiful" write. It is all so very sad. You are on my prayer list. I know it is very hard. May God bless you and give you His peace.......................
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Date: 6/7/2022 8:35:00 PM
I feel the intense pain you feel in your heart, dear Robert ! The cut you have received is still bleeding I know. The untimely death of the dear partner in life leaves the survivor miserable. But we have to cope with the dictates of fate and live in the memories of a life lived together happily.... ! May God strengthen you and help you to live anew.....
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/8/2022 4:25:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. All prayers are welcomed as climbing out of this dark pit is my goal. Yet heart grieves and refuses to let go. Mind cries, this tragedy one must never forget. That life can turn on a dime and rip away the greatest of treasures= true love. And the angel sent to gift happiness/ ... God bless/\...
Date: 6/7/2022 2:22:00 PM
Robert a fave for me. Such powerful lines! “ I try to walk back the tragic news.” I do that daily with my cousin who died. As I wrote you, I feel her presence! It keeps me going. But, as you know, the tears still fall. Hugs,Panagiota
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/7/2022 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Yes, such a loss cannot be described adequately to reveal the depths of sorrows or the intensity of the longing felt and endured. In dreams, she speaks to me. Her smile soothes me and give me hope.. God bless..
Date: 6/7/2022 12:27:00 PM
I know you're still grieving, my dear friend. I wish I could take your pain away. She will always be with you, right there in your heart. Your thoughts caress gently around me. I'm keeping you and your family in my prayers. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/7/2022 12:30:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Your words, your prayers are truly and very deeply appreciated. I pray that God bless, you and yours.
Date: 6/7/2022 4:18:00 AM
They leave a void when they leave us Robert but they live on in our hearts. Tom
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/7/2022 6:01:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. Yes, they do because the flesh passes away but the sincere, beautiful love is eternal. God bless.
Date: 6/6/2022 7:50:00 PM
So much so. I weep for you as I weep for my dad too. Well-expressed
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2022 2:58:00 PM
Just to clarify, my Mom died. My dad is missing her. Thank you, Robert. God bless you too!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/7/2022 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. I am sure that your beloved Dad watches over you now. God bless..

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