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To be loved by a poet -2

You ignite the romance of my dreams. I wish to encroach your lips with my tasty sandwich of perfected rosemary teat. I'll make your brain immune to my soul so you become out of breath when far from your source. My toes will python your emotions, make you feel good with motions that can't be found in Neptune. Oh! my Fairy prince, should I Massage those fire clay masculinity and blow your mind out of its organ? I'm devoured by the moans of your consistency. Devoted to the strings of your intentionality. Should I delineate your cubes of grip so it illuminates the lines of storytellers? Or are you too shy to tell the world that, You're the heel of my heart, the calf of my stamina. The spine of the moon and the Larynx of the dark stars. Honey! I'll let you dance to the rhythm of Calla Lily while I paint in the beams of Zinnias.

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Date: 7/18/2024 10:38:00 PM
So lovely and sensual, Tonye. Great writing! Best wishes.
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Date: 7/7/2024 8:53:00 PM
"Oh! my Fairy prince, should I Massage those fire clay masculinity and blow your mind out of its organ?" This is sensuality at its peak. You can deal with hot emotions without getting burnt. You deal with it with so much ease...while many fumble and feel embarrassed when it comes to speaking about sensuous relationships. I wonder if this will have a third part when desire culminates into reality. Great twin poems on love and romance, dear Tonye.
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Tonye George
Date: 7/14/2024 9:01:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Valsa. You're so kind. Thank you for your support always.
Date: 7/7/2024 8:05:00 PM
Such creative descriptions like the python line. Loved that one. I would have to write my poem on hubbie and call it. To be Loved By a Redneck. Haha
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Tonye George
Date: 7/14/2024 9:02:00 AM
Hàhaha. That would be lovely Dear, Andrea. You should do it. He'd love it so much. Thank you for your support.
Date: 7/7/2024 11:20:00 AM
Somehow I missed the fire extinguisher sale on your website, Tonye. Hot, hotter, and hottest. ~ Blaize
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Tonye George
Date: 7/14/2024 9:03:00 AM
You didn't really miss.. we still have a few up for grabs. Think you could get here on time? Thank you for your support Gersh.
Date: 7/3/2024 12:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. What a great ending. Have a blessed day...................
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Tonye George
Date: 7/14/2024 9:03:00 AM
Thank you Paula. Hope you have been well.
Date: 7/3/2024 1:18:00 AM
Quite a passionate poem. Your metaphors delight.
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Tonye George
Date: 7/14/2024 9:04:00 AM
Hey friend. Thank you so much. Been away.
Date: 7/1/2024 6:48:00 AM
Ohh, a message of open persuasion topped with spiced come _ ons? If that was the intent, I gotcha...womanpower!
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Tonye George
Date: 7/14/2024 9:04:00 AM
Hahaha Nette. I'm glad. Thank you so much.
Date: 6/30/2024 2:27:00 PM
Hah and you talk about my metaphors, your metaphors left me speechless , so creative and what a way to describe such intense passionate love and romance? Well i sometimes want to make my partners brain immune to my soul and leave him out of breath :D haha. I love “Oh! my Fairy prince, should I Massage those fire clay masculinity and blow your mind out of its organ?” Ah lord! You sound like one that loves from not just the heart but from deep within! Your wordplay here is impressive! Love it
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Tonye George
Date: 6/30/2024 8:22:00 PM
Thank you, Dearest Ink. This comment made me smile so good. hahaha. I found a worthy muse and I'm trying to bring out the other side of a poet that's not dark. Thank you so much, hope you have been well.
Date: 6/30/2024 2:02:00 PM
A lovely and romantic second part to your being loved by a poet series.. Love the last two lines.. The poem vividly explores themes of passion and longing through rich and imaginative imagery. The use of metaphors, such as the "python" and "fire clay masculinity," creates a sensuous and dynamic atmosphere. The language is playful yet intense, reflecting a deep emotional connection. The poem effectively blends celestial and earthly elements, enhancing the romantic tone.
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Tonye George
Date: 6/30/2024 8:25:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Silent. some feelings do need celestial elements to express them. Thank you for your warm insights, always. It's always a pleasure.
Date: 6/29/2024 2:05:00 PM
Hot stuff Tonye. And your metaphors - classic as always. "My toes will python your emotions..." Trying to wrap my head around that one lol. Will there be a part three?
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Tonye George
Date: 6/30/2024 3:09:00 AM
Thank you, buddy. I appreciate your support always. I can't thank you enough. yes, there would be, Dear Tom.
Date: 6/29/2024 1:58:00 PM
Very passionate write! I love it! I struggle with free forms but you do it well!
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Tonye George
Date: 6/30/2024 3:12:00 AM
hello lovely Karen, thank you so much.

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