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To Be Heard

It was only a simple moment The chattering of a bird Singing in the woodland - When it struck me We only want to be heard May it be our thoughts Translated in a song, Or speaking from higher ground Maybe sometimes our words warble too And if it weren't for silence, we wouldn't hear And maybe also our voice needs silence first As we gravitate in this pull of energy This yearning to be heard - To be part of everything around us Heidi Sands 7/1/20

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Date: 7/6/2020 6:24:00 PM
Great poem, made me think for a while about your message..
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/7/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thanks Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/6/2020 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Timothy. Your comment is appreciated. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Date: 7/5/2020 10:06:00 PM
Wow, love this Heidi, yes to be heard, so many there is, including us, here in soup. But some want more, like the despot of the planet, those with thirst for power..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/6/2020 12:40:00 PM
So true Harry. Thank you for your comment and input. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)
Date: 7/4/2020 8:30:00 PM
Heidi, 'And if it weren't for silence, we wouldn't hear' - Imagine that so well. Hear and enjoy the silence after the thunder rolls. Happy 4th of July... -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/5/2020 7:18:00 AM
Hi Richard. Happy 4th of July to you...thank you for your input...take care. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 7/4/2020 3:53:00 PM
We all want to be understood.... But some struggle to understand, some struggle to express and silence can be very loud ..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/5/2020 7:17:00 AM
Well put. Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 7/3/2020 5:53:00 AM
"yearning to be heard" is what causes so much of life to happen!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/3/2020 10:31:00 AM
Yes, that's true Caren. Thank you :)
Date: 7/2/2020 4:51:00 PM
- If one wants to be heard ... one must also have the ability to listen, dear Heidi :) - I love listening ... especially to the nature :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2020 4:55:00 PM
So true Anne-Lise! Me too. I hope you are well. Thank you :)
Date: 7/2/2020 1:58:00 PM
I find most people want to talk more than I want to listen; if only they had something to say! So it is great you write your thoughts down so we can all consider them! Aloha! Rico
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Rico. I appreciate your visit and feedback on this :) Have a great day!
Date: 7/2/2020 1:51:00 PM
Maybe sometimes our words warble too!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2020 1:54:00 PM
Yes.. maybe they do lol. Thanks Kim :)
Date: 7/2/2020 9:49:00 AM
What was that?... I can't hear you lol...yes I can...loud & clear...nicely penned dear poetess...your words are heard thru-out eternity...god bless...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2020 10:22:00 AM
I am happy you can hear me WW lol. Thank you for your kind comment ..hugs :)
Date: 7/2/2020 8:42:00 AM
Profound writing dearest , Heidi! It is true that something becomes known because of its opposite. Cold is known because of hot, soft because of hard ...sound because of silence and so on. Enjoyed your poem. Hugs xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2020 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios. Exactly! Hugs :)
Date: 7/2/2020 8:37:00 AM
This resonates with me, Heidi. I’m adding it to my FAV poems list. We may have something to say, but if we’re “to be heard” how important it is to also really listen. Take care and stay safe! ~Mark
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Mark. I am happy to hear that. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)
Date: 7/1/2020 8:18:00 PM
I believe that you have pinpointed something important, i.e., that if it weren't for silence, we wouldn't hear. Exactly! Thanks, Heidi! :) Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2020 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your kindness. I hope your day goes well :)
Date: 7/1/2020 5:18:00 PM
thought provoking piece Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2020 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I hope all is well. Hugs :)
Date: 7/1/2020 4:26:00 PM
It's a blessing to be surrounded by nature.. to be amid its sights and sounds....so well captured in your poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/1/2020 4:58:00 PM
Yes it is a blessing Vijay. Thank you for your kind comment :)

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