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To Be Continued - -

Your furtive glances darting the nape of my neck, making skin tingle surreptitiously in sideways advances charismatically bourgeois, nonchalantly flipped dark tresses playing demurely duteous coy games, irreproachable attentive longing toying 'pon lashes fluttered fluster, back's curvature arched a trifle in heaving breasts' concerted efforts, pheromones released the sweet spot as seduction's scent wafted, blushing moistly parted rosewine lips licking whetted possibilities of hitherto untold steamy stories, yielding beyond curiosity's fiery impulses unfurling the twinkle of a dazzled eye to be continued...

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/17/2016 8:05:00 AM

Always keep them wanting more...good stuff! You'll have people waiting like patience on a monument for the second part...if you ever decide to write it. One passion writer to another...nice work here! MC

Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 9:04:00 AM

I don't think so, was meant to be a cliff hanger, left up to the imagination! Thanks again MC.

Bukiwe Tiyane

Date: 10/15/2016 2:37:00 PM

Wow, passionate :-)

Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:12:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2016 2:47:00 AM

ohh, passionate imagery lives in you, paloma... tell me more!..huggs

Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:11:00 AM

Thanks Nette, thrilled you enjoyed it. :)

Constance La France

Date: 10/14/2016 7:53:00 PM

Wow, now that is sensual, excellent

Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:11:00 AM

Thank you!

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/14/2016 2:39:00 PM

If this doesn't quicken the heart, nothing will !! (A girl would have to be dead !) .. The (to be continued).....may be too x-rated for the Soup's rules, but don't let that stop you !!! :) LOL !!

Paloma P
Date: 10/17/2016 7:08:00 AM

Thanks Carrie, never know where the poetic winds will blow ya. :) That was just my title, never intended to write a continuation.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2016 10:53:00 AM

Passionate...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paloma P
Date: 10/14/2016 1:57:00 PM

Much appreciated, thanks Sara.

Chris Green

Date: 10/14/2016 10:49:00 AM

Hmmm, catching my breath, ok, damn Paloma, what is going on here and unfair "to be continued..." That's a tease if I ever saw one. Hot, romantic, steamy, alluring, seductive, sensual poetry. Did I mention hot? You sure do know how to manipulate words to make the reader sweat while reading (and re-reading) Really nice.