To Be a Kid Once Again

I don't need to remember what it was like to be a kid I don' t need to memorize where all the fun had been . It was in the unique moment of a first-born spirit without obligations and responsibilities . A Brief moment recalled and lived in a dream. Immersed in the body of a little brown-eyed girl How I danced with the flutter of a butterfly ,over and over again. Dressed up neatly in a white collar shirt ,and a navy blue pinafore dress, How I ran , breathlessly , in evergreen fields full of yellow buttercups, dandelion buds, and almond trees which barely blossomed through the eyes of women , and men . How I jumped like a frog earning its freedom , doing my utmost to catch the sky, to reach the soaring hand-made kite ,which kept moving far and high. My left -hand never letting go of that special red balloon , Mama's reward , on a windy afternoon. Each following morning, feet too tired to get out of bed but that lasted only till' I saw Uncle Frans'hat. How happy I was to sit on his lap ,, and listen to bible stories He read. How happy I was , to lick early fresh raindrops running down my cheeks,so different from the ones I feel when I'm out of my sleep. Moments to preserve. .. There on the back seat of papa's olive- green car , Our Chitty -Chitty Bang- Bang , travelled so far. Mum,dad, my brother and I ,face 'gainst the wind, Open mouths , Indian sounds , humming along , waiting for birds'wings to flutter as they sing. What a moment , of hide and seek,musical chairs , Of midnight mass and Christmas prayers . I lived them all .... Splashes of waves, shovel and buckets on sands , Autumn's foliage , picnics with cousins uncles,aunties ,and friends. Immersed in the body of a little girl with long noichettes french -braids swaying in the breeze , Playing hopscotch,running wild in vacant cobbled streets. I do not need to remember what it was like to be a kid I am there, in the dream , I had lived . I tasted pure honey before I'd been kissed Before years took their toll , wiped off sugar -frosted pink from my innocent lips .
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Simpson Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 12:13 AM
I love the imagery Charmaine, well done
Mansfield Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 6:56 PM
Hi Charmaine. I LOVED this poem... having lived in Malta for over 35 years and having brought a family up I can recount all these things you have mentioned here (except my childhood was spent in the UK). I have watched my own children doing as you did... But why let it stop? Why let years curse teh pink of your innocent lips. You can relive these moments again... I did, only last week, in the fields and narrow country lanes that this beautiful country has to offer. Go on a picnic. Go for a drive
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Your last line made me sad... the rest of the piece was a glorification of childhood. I loved '...hide and seek, and musical chairs, of Midnight Mass and Christmas prayers.' and all the rest. If I picked my very best favorite line I'd be quoting the whole thing! BRAVO Charmaine! but do me a favor... work on resolving that last line. Keith
Nance Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on being featured as poem of the week!
Meade Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 12:50 PM
You are amazing!! The beauty and gentleness of your writing is like a warm blanket at night -- love to snuggle in your words.
Promise Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Memories of childhood, the kid inside. Enjoyed this very much. Nice write and a 7. Warmest congrats on making Poem Of The Week. Best wishes, RP.
Romaine Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Hey Charmaine, a warm and hearty congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTW!! Such wonderful and delightful memories being shared with us. Bringing back warm memories for me too! Excellent writing and well deserved honor! Be Blessed, Neva
Chircop Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Aww!!! Thanks so much tps for honourin g me with potd & podw.I'm blushing 'Happy ' : ), and another big thankyou to my souper friends here,thankyou for reading !!! Charma : )
Dillenbeck Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 1:50 PM
So I'm going along on this dreamy ride, enjoying this verbal incarnation of a life story, and then I got to "cursed" in the last line. Shocking; well, at least surprising, interesting, intriguing, made me think about why not simply "creased"? Anyway, such familiar memories painted with crisp choices and flow. Thank you. Gerald Oliver
Dillenbeck Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Interesting, we approach word choices with our bio-developmental baggage, vitals, nutrients for choice-making, frames, lenses.
Chircop Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Oh thanks so much for your comment,much appreciated. Re creased..The word creased sounds nicer than cursed..and I was tempted to change it...But my lips are still uncreased..: )..Dont know now ?
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 9:30 AM
I love it! Congratulations, hugs Rick.
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Wow poem of the week too. : )). ...congratulations
Chircop Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:28 PM
Just blushing happy : )
Sergi Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Hi Charmaine: A beautiful tribute to your childhood in remembrance.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 7:40 AM
This made me think of "The Sound of Music". I was carried by your lovely notes.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Charmaine, beautiful and I wish I have some of these in my childhood days.. =`) And I pray all children now and the children to come shall experience these all one or another.. =`) a7. I enjoyed the read.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)
Callus Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 8:33 AM
You have opened a chest full of lovely memories, Charm. The older your daughter grows, more of these memories will come to mind as you narrate to her episodes from your sweet 'innocent' years. Touched by the ending. #7 ~ Regards // paul
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:45 AM
A serene read. You seem to enjoy the memories, and now you have let me enjoy them too. Thank you.
Leake Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Beautiuful and innocent thoughts Charma, Reminiscing through childhood memories!! Enjoyed this!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 12:42 PM
- I really enjoy your beautiful lines today, Charmaine - Pleasant thoughts :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 8:48 AM
How beautiful remembering the innocence of youth....what a precious dream....like Ian I'll be back when I have more time to read it again....a fav
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 8:16 AM
This was really written with a loving hand, Charmaine. I enjoyed it immensely. My favorite line..."This time I've tasted sweet honey, before I 've been kissed"... VERY sweet.
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