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To all the heart breakers -a ZOMBIE's valentine

Wouldn't you rather~

Wouldn't you rather be dead?
Maybe shoot yourself in the head?
Over my dead heart, I'd never want to be a zombie like you.
The sight of your limbs are rotten all the time.
All synonyms say of you looks like a 3 legged swine.
Go ahead and do us all a favor, 
hide and stash yourself away from all your neighbor. 
I think I'd rather have my eyes stuck with glue
So I won't have to look at you
When it comes to family friends, you ain't got none.
You're always gonna be called the lonely retarded one.
Who could ever love a face like yours.
not even your mother see's pass your gores 
No need for privacy when you pee
Go ahead and take a leak and drown yourself in the sea.
Don't think for one second you are irresistible 
Love making with a zombie is impossible.

Wouldn't you rather be dead?
maybe shoot yourself in the head

The time to kill yourself is at hand.
Slicing your wrist is what we recommend.  
Cut your tongue off, don't want to hear you squeal.   
Blood all over, your face is no big deal
A sword or machete will only pick up the pace
I wanna see your guts pop out your mid-waist 
Contaminated objects is a must
Anything to remove your face of disgust.
The easy part is the best
Once you are gone we will all feel blessed,
The flaw of your existence  
Is what keeps us all in distance 

Wouldn't you rather be dead?
maybe shoot yourself in the head

Close your eyes and die
No one wants to hear you cry
You said you wanted to be loved
believe me~ you're better off unloved
I say do yourself off
Anyways you've always had it rough...
Go ahead and scream
This is not a dream
Now see how you make me feel
All I want is for you to end your ugly ordeal.
I will praise this day of course
Knowing soon you'll be a rotting corpse.

happy valentine ~ TO: All My DEADBEAT X-es from Texas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 9/23/2018 11:07:00 PM
Wow! Sounds like those X's in Texas had it coming! Some of us Texas boys are true followers of love. Don't give up! I've been reading some of your stuff and some of your reader's comments. I agree that you write from deep inside yourself. Raw, visceral, and honest. Good stuff, Skat.
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Date: 2/17/2017 12:20:00 AM
Hmmm. Impressive!
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Date: 12/30/2016 3:39:00 PM
Unbelievable! Wow and i thought I was the only one who had Ex's like that. Kudos to you SKAT. Drop me a Soup Note sometime. Miss you
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Date: 10/7/2016 3:25:00 AM
A great brassy poem, Skat. You handled a vexing relationship problem w/skill and sharp wit. Slicing, dicing and a boot-out-the-door icing. Good stuff. Great imagery. Love to you and yours.
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Date: 9/9/2016 11:57:00 PM
hi! really i love each and every poems of yours.thank you
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Date: 8/24/2016 1:36:00 PM
I'm speechless, very powerful Love it!
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Date: 6/8/2016 2:53:00 AM
I both enjoyed and didn't enjoy this poem. It shows each and every pain one may deal with and it shows it well. The way I interpreted it, with the whole zombie character saying you may as well die-I love love love that you chose a zombie to represent such a character. Anyhow, I took look forward to reading your poetry as well.
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Date: 3/18/2016 12:26:00 PM
Skat, your Zombie analogy is powerful and vivid, as well as, something many can relate to with the Zombie mania on T.V. ~Brett
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:03:00 AM
Those who cause such heartbreak must be zombies, for a living soul would certainly not inflict such pain, and I felt the anger and hurt in this piece. So well penned.
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:53:00 PM
Love this poem, my ex cheated on me with a H*e that is well known where I live and I trusted him, now I feel like I can never love again. And he's back with that girl and he called me a cheating c*nt and I'm just so over people shutting me out and using me, I feel like this poem has reached into my core and has pulled all of my darkness together. Love, Val *Hugs*
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Date: 1/9/2016 2:10:00 PM
SKAT A, Your pen is anger personified. you took hard on your persona. This poem is great and emotional!
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:27:00 PM
That's pretty dark, lol i would hate to be one of your exs
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Date: 4/15/2015 11:44:00 AM
Brava, skat. So well done. Sympathize and relate--Have a couple of exes also.
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Date: 3/20/2015 4:03:00 PM
Skat, Let me join with your many admirers to say, I really enjoyed your expression and excellent words and style! Thanks for welcoming me to the Soup in your unique style! Yours in budding friendship. Tom
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:23:00 AM
Lol... Scary!! :P but awsome write :D
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Date: 2/15/2015 9:20:00 AM
I'm glad I'm not one of your ex's and now I'm even afraid of going to Texas...thanks for the Valentine's wishes....hugs Tim
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Date: 12/1/2014 3:40:00 PM
Awesome vehemence, and excellent style.. truly a great write. Thanks for sharing~Joel (Rated 7)
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Date: 2/15/2014 12:07:00 PM
SH*T SKAT, I'd never wan to piss you off!-Hahahahahahahaha...Let's just stay friends, LOL, Hahahahahahahaha//GREAT WRITE-LOVED IT!!!-Hahahahaha...still laughing..//Sinclair
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Date: 1/26/2014 12:02:00 PM
The truth is SKAT The bigger the zombie the longer will he feed. For many the attraction of the dark side is too great. Enjoyed the poem though.
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Date: 12/27/2013 8:12:00 PM
Awesome poem! Great job!
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Date: 12/26/2013 7:29:00 AM
This is very well done! Hope you had an awesome Christmas! Thank you for the warm welcome.
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:28:00 AM
very scary Skat congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:38:00 PM
Very clever. Congrats SKAT-LOVE!
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Date: 11/21/2013 6:48:00 PM
Awesome ..congratulation dear Skat <3
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:21:00 PM
Congratulations Skat on your win.... Roger
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