To All of You

There are times we are left to cope
With situations that drain our hope

Leaving us full of despair
At how some people just don't care

About the evil that they do
To good people like all of you

We are left to somehow face
That in mankind there is disgrace

And those of us left alive
Must find away to survive

As you pick up the pieces of your life
Without your mother, father, husband or wife

And some of you God forbid
Without the love of your kids

We must band together with a brotherhood
Show that in this world there is some good

Because we are together in this deal
We try to help each other heal

We seek in each other good advice
And offer each other sacrifice

We hold each other in prayer and song
As we continue to re-build the wrong

Because what else in the world can we do
Except let the light of good shine through

The evil darkness and despair
Of a catastrophic lack of care

We want you to know you are not alone
Think of America as a giant cone

And all of us are funneling through
Our prayers and hopes to all of you


Posted for Nathan's 9-11 contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/2/2010 1:46:00 PM
A great poem Michael. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:19:00 PM
Michael, many congratulations on your win in Nathan's fine contest, based on the tragic events of 9-11,2001 >> James
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Date: 4/2/2010 12:48:00 PM
Well done, Michael....congratulations on your honorable mention in Nathan's contest. Hope you are doing well! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/2/2010 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my 9-11 contest! Nate
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Date: 10/26/2009 2:16:00 PM
This poem is written very well. I love the rhyming you did for it is fantastic. Great job
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Date: 9/21/2009 11:36:00 AM
You have SoupMail. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 2:41:00 PM
This is a powerful write, MJ, and I couldn't agree with you more about the need to forge a stronger brotherhood of man. With God's help, perhaps one day we shall. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2009 6:37:00 AM
A wonderful way to speak from the heart of so many. You are so gifed. I have missed reading your work, it is wonderful to be back on. Many blessings to a soul that lights the way for so many. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 9/14/2009 12:48:00 AM
I don't know how you do it? You are the King of the couplet, my friend. Love, Lainie
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Date: 9/13/2009 9:48:00 AM
A beautiful sentiment in this couplet, one we all share with you and your inspiring heart. Good luck in contest. It's a winner either way.I love the rhyme too. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/10/2009 3:39:00 PM
Inspirational view on the topic. Blessings to you for sharing your faith with us. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:33:00 PM
The hope in the ending of your poem, unites us as a compassionate people, your prayer is a nation's prayer. God Bless them all. >>love, Carrie
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Date: 9/10/2009 9:29:00 AM
I think I see and feel a winner in this one Michael. I know you feel and mean every word you wrote. Wishing you the best. Love, Carol YF4L
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Date: 9/10/2009 9:06:00 AM
Wish you good luck for your entry, Michael. This is a very well written couplet. And thank you for your comments....Gert
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:05:00 AM
Michael, this is excellent in both the form and the sentiment. It feels good to read your words again. I have missed everyone here. I hope you are well and look forward to sharing our words again! Good luck, my friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/9/2009 10:18:00 PM
Great entry. Should be a winner. Thak you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2009 9:03:00 PM
I Could Feel the Hand-Holding and the Wish for a better Humanity... And Even before I got to the end... I Thought of 9/11... That's how good it was... Going into my Favorites, so I can read it often... MoonBee
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Date: 9/9/2009 9:01:00 PM
Michael let me be the first to congratulate you on some fine two line rhyme, I love it, God bless you to win. If not, it's still a very good poem. Sincerely, John Moses
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