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you read out of obligation a tit for tat consolation a "thank you for your visit" affirmation it's cool, this unspoken rule I do it too, so what’s new? It's only being civil community code of camaraderie who can break free? It needs to be done loyalties need to be won so do the comment hit and run then on to another one I appreciate that, truth be told this give and take system should hold on poetic pleasantries, I am sold “Reciprocity” is gold oh, but that's not quite same as being sure that you came because I'm a favorite name in your poet hall of fame Come goaded by greed Needing each word for your feed Voyeuristic as I bleed You need my pain to be freed Come craving my rhyme fix The potency of this mix My poetic party tricks Lines that give you the kicks I'm a poet pillaged by pain who's been baptized by rain holding on to the sane let me battle your bane Read me for you know You need me to grow Dip in the stream of this flow Words above, words below Read and blaze in the fire word kindling of your desire let these flames take you higher as they make each thought perspire Obligation is overrated Though my words might be dated the ideas? NOT antiquated to existence they’re related Come visit me Come here so you’ll see Passion infused poetry let it meld you and me Eileen Manassian

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Date: 10/27/2017 8:02:00 AM
I have always wanted to be Tat! Sorry I couldn't resist *lol*
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/28/2017 12:50:00 PM
You are.....incorrigible! ;) What a funny comment.
Date: 10/1/2017 11:45:00 AM
And sometimes there's just a need to touch base.. Cheers
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Date: 8/30/2017 12:12:00 PM
Hello Eileen, all i can say is Wow! I have nothing eles to say. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/22/2017 9:28:00 AM
Hi Eileen, I have read all the poems you have posted here and am richer for the experience. Never stop writing. Since I have had less time to be here my readers have dropped to a trickle. I understand, out of sight out of mind. I do appreciate the kind souls who drop by to visit. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 8/22/2017 7:02:00 AM
I can understand your point here, it is people being nice.. That is important, however, sometimes I can tell if a person has actually read a poem or not.. but, some are not good at giving feedback, I am the same.. I don't normally know what to say.. I'm not one to dissect a poem.
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:03:00 AM
Eileen, I hear what you are saying but I am not sure I agree on some points. As a community we are stronger together. I, personally take great strength in that fact that anyone at all reads my work, let alone those who take the time to comment. Vienna is one of my most favorite cities. I hope you enjoy your stay. -- Dean
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Date: 8/13/2017 4:32:00 PM
Hi Eileen...I am sure that many of those who stop by to read your poems do so because they find pleasure in your writing, and not just to reciprocate! Congrats on p.o.t.d. Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/13/2017 12:34:00 AM
Wow! Eileen , I see why this well written write got p.o.t.d. I agree with Freddie it deserved P.O.T.Y. You are an amazing poet and you remind us all what "poetry" is all about. Although your words ring true, I take delight in reading you because your "ink" is one of kind.Excellent job:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/11/2017 8:16:00 PM
AHA!! I found it. Yes, we all want people to read for what we are passionate about. So many wanting this!! It's good when we find the poets like you who make us feel it!! congrats on that POTD.
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Date: 8/9/2017 3:16:00 PM
Your words blossom with the truth Eileen. Congratulations on having this fine poem honored with POTD! I hope you are enjoying your holiday! Aloha, Connie : )
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Date: 8/9/2017 12:30:00 PM
Eileen, congratulations on POTD. Your words always a quality of beauty and intensity of emotion, it's welcoming and open arms to read. ~*
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Date: 8/9/2017 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet on POTD...as to why I read your poetry and I can't say this for every Poet I read.I read your poetry for its beautiful honesty in its depth of thought and feeling...never stop writing my friend...
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Date: 8/9/2017 3:56:00 AM
Dear all...thank you for your kind comments. I'm sorry I can't answer individually. I'm on holiday in Vienna. Will answer each of you when I'm back. I'm honored that you'd visit and comment. Blessings all.
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Date: 8/9/2017 1:54:00 AM
A great poem Eileen, which I really enjoyed. So deserving of POTD my friend...Maria
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Date: 8/8/2017 11:34:00 PM
Well said and congrats on the POTD...
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Date: 8/8/2017 2:35:00 PM
We all need those encouraging comments 'it's a give and take, “Reciprocity is gold"....Congrats on POTD
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Date: 8/8/2017 10:08:00 AM
Great poem, Eileen. Even more elevating message. This should be a POTY candidate. Great flow and bounce. Truth given by the pound, not the ounce. You are a poetess laureate no doubt about it. Great title too. Love and peace always.
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Date: 8/8/2017 10:10:00 AM
As for the commenting aspect ... I have eye problems from time to time, so I can't read and comment as much as I like. So many fantastic minds here at PSoup, try to absorb as much as I can each day. Love and joy always.
Date: 8/8/2017 9:51:00 AM
A subject that needed kind attention, and you achieved that! I read my favorites, of course, but also read a lot random. I comment when I like a poem, so my comments are sincere. If I don't like it, why should I ruin someone's day?
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Date: 8/8/2017 9:25:00 AM
Very clever. And a relevant topic. Congrats on potd.
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Date: 8/8/2017 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD honors Eileen...
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Date: 8/8/2017 8:48:00 AM
I started my day by reading your poem. Lots of truth there. Comments are important, but sincerity more so. And sometimes, the tit-for-tat visit to an unknown-to-us poet who left us a comment can lead to the discovery of wonderful work. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 8/8/2017 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 8/8/2017 8:01:00 AM
Back to say lovely to see you with potd! Hugs a mo!
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Date: 8/8/2017 7:59:00 AM
Stopping by to dip into your flow Eileen. Congratulations on POTD. Haven't felt much like reading or writing lately. I enjoyed this one:)
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Date: 8/8/2017 7:50:00 AM
FABULOUS!! I love it! And yeah I think I spent more time reading you all poems than writing my own :) I do enjoy reading. Anyhow, I'm shouting a HUGE congrats on your absolute beautiful POTD, Miss Eileen :)
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