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sycamore keys pirouette like dancers storm clouds gather non traditional haiku N/a in Final Call Of NAs Your Most Meaningful One Judged on 10/8/20 also n/a in COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (13)any form any theme judged on 9/21/2020 Submitted to HM's and NA's October 2020 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 09/21/20

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Constance La France

Date: 11/8/2020 5:19:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge with this excellent poem _Constance

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2020 5:22:00 AM

thanks for giving us the opportunity in your second chance contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/7/2020 10:28:00 AM

Jan, it is a pleasure to revisit this beautiful haiku and offer you my congratulations for a wonderful win in Constance's contest.. ~Susan

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2020 5:21:00 AM

thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt

Date: 11/6/2020 7:04:00 PM

Jan, I enjoyed reading of your tiny dancers. The storm clouds were an ominous poetic twist ending. Congrats on your win, my friend. Hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2020 5:21:00 AM

thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2020 10:50:00 AM

Jan, great imagery and these little seeds. Congratulations on Constance contest. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2020 5:21:00 AM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/24/2020 2:32:00 PM

Stunning imagery of Nature, Jan, a moment captured with your gifted pen. Love the change of mood with your last line. A great haiku! Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2020 4:18:00 PM

we have had wet windy weather lately especially the last couple of days and that has inspired my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/22/2020 4:59:00 PM

Lovely! Lovely! My kind of ku!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/23/2020 2:25:00 AM

thanks Kim, Brian didnt like it I got an na lol:) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/22/2020 2:03:00 PM

Super Ku, I used to love spinning those in the air as a kid. Thanks for the memory.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2020 2:08:00 PM

I walk past a sycamore tree almost every day and the keys were twirling down:-) hugs Jan xx

V. Deepa

Date: 9/22/2020 12:13:00 PM

Wow...i like them when they spin ..round and round ..:-) Sort of pleasure to view them.:-) Loved your Haiku dear Jan mam.I believe your doing well.Take care.Much love:-)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2020 2:08:00 PM

thanks so much V Deepa yes all is good here hope you are well too:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/22/2020 7:52:00 AM

-"Helicopter" in pirouette dance ... spin in the air :) - Lovely haiku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/22/2020 12:11:00 PM

yes they are like helicopter blades - there is a tree we walk past when we go to the shops the floor is littered with the keys - i love to watch them in flight to the floor:-) hugs jan xx