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A man in agony waiting in line to relieve his bladder opined: “How I wish the line were shorter and beer brewed other than with water!”

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Date: 8/11/2023 11:40:00 AM
Been there many times, especially at concerts. Ugh
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 8/11/2023 12:22:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Tom. I too have been there. / Best to you in your writinf endeavors. Maurice
Date: 7/25/2023 11:19:00 PM
ha ha ha love it Maurice ... got to say the queues at the gent's loos are always shorter than those of the ladies! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2023 10:48:00 AM
Ha! Very clever, Maurice!
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 6/12/2023 11:31:00 AM
Which is why I never took to beer, even when in Germany for 4 years! No such problem with wine, however. Thanks Ilene for stopping by. / Maurice

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