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Tinderbox

Emotions erupt in anger and hate. Disputes can flame into war, even more. Intelligence drought, no room for debate. While a crisis exists from sky to shore in Earth's struggles we quietly ignore. We forget they're numbered: majestic trees, captured by fires and a dry thunder's tease. Our thoughts were gentled by edens we miss. Minds became parched, like the greens, by degrees. Where do thoughts rest in a whirlwind like this? I thought of some words William Shatner said ~overcome with sadness when touching space, because the beauty lies with us instead, Earth is alone~ by light years that we chase. moving through time with an uncommon grace. If Shatner's words were but taken to heart-- replacing hate and fear with a fresh start: kindness displayed by Earth dwellers to all working together, not stretching apart we'd save ourselves and this beautiful ball. October 20, 2022 for "This or That, Vol. 14 Poetry Contest" by Edward Ibeh Dizain howmanysyllables.com=10 A Second Place

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Date: 11/11/2022 8:07:00 PM
Theme of tinderbox beautifully brought out through this emotions poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/11/2022 4:08:00 PM
Great poem, Ann:-) It's no small feat writing two dizains, but you pulled it off seamlessly. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 11/11/2022 3:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Ann. What lovely poetry you've created, with a very well-stated thought.
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Date: 10/31/2022 4:54:00 PM
A lovely thought, sweet lady!
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/6/2022 2:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!
Date: 10/28/2022 8:51:00 PM
A great poem in a great poetic form. This poem is an exhortation for peace and harmony and the need to work together for a better world. All the Best Ann in Ibeh's contest!
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/30/2022 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa. I love your poems!
Date: 10/23/2022 6:09:00 PM
Hi Anne, Good to hear from you! It's probably not what he's looking for, however :) Warm hugs to you, too. I understand El Nino is coming back for a warmer, dryer winter. Hurry spring...
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Date: 10/23/2022 10:01:00 AM
A wonderful message Ann. Sending warm hugs out to you my friend.
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Date: 10/22/2022 10:55:00 PM
Oh, hugs to you for writing this absolutely heartfelt poem. Amazing form and message!
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/23/2022 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, BJ. The form is Dizain, and I really like it, too!
Date: 10/22/2022 1:25:00 AM
Love this Ann, so much thought, and the form of poetry, fits so well your sentiment. Good luck in contest, if it was mind , this would be hard to beat.. All the best to you. Harry
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/30/2022 4:48:00 PM
Dear Harry, you are always so kind. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 10/21/2022 3:13:00 PM
a very interesting and creative approach to the challenge.. This one is a real brain twister for me. I mean, trying to do one myself!
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Date: 10/21/2022 12:18:00 PM
While I would not call William Shatner a great philosopher, I do agree that humankind must band together to protect this beautiful blue ball for ourselves and the generations after, if there are to be generations after~
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/21/2022 2:12:00 PM
No, not a great philosopher, admittedly, but I was taken by his sadness--seeing Earth's beauty and aloneness, and that it's up to us alone to save her.
Date: 10/20/2022 8:14:00 PM
Nicely said, Ann. They do not care of the devastation they cause. Many blessing my friend from all of Halloween.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/21/2022 9:03:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. I see it in fewer birds to feed, fewer bunnies.
Date: 10/20/2022 2:22:00 PM
Sad but true.This has all become overwhelming to me, so now I just look for laughter ~ in old sitcoms and with friends. I don't know why we haven't all gone mad...or, maybe we have...
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Date: 10/20/2022 11:40:00 AM
Sadly, the Native American concept of Earth Mother has been replaced with the Christian concept of plunder since God will restore everything on the Resurrection.
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