Christopher Grieves Poet Rhyme

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"A heart is not judged by how much you love; but by how much you are loved by others." - Frank L. Baum

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A Jinjagoliath poem:
26th June 2023
POTD 28.6.23
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Tin Man - ::POTD::

My work is identity
The axe in my hand
No blisters to bother me
As for years I just stand

The weeds and the flowers
Call me back down to earth
The brown rust confuses
Destroys my self-worth

The tears and the rain
Have frozen me here
It could be forever
At least that is my fear

But then I hear singing
And love with a twirl
There's something of beauty
This dog and this girl

She stops to acknowledge
Where my work is so stale
I am rescued completely
My Dorothy Gale

We converse, no lips moving
I creak and I groan
She talks of a journey
To get herself home

I determine to help her
As she's helping me
We walk and we talk
It feels good to be free

It's strange but I know that
She strives for the best
I feel something beating
Once again in my chest

Not sure where we're going
When this journey will end
But I feel like I love her
This newly found friend

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Christina Bowring July 16, 2024 at 12:46 PM Dear Chris, this is a very, very late response but congratulations for POTD. Absolutely loved this especially as it’s one of my all time fav films. You have captured the tin man so beautifully and the true essence of the film- precious friendship. Your narration as always expresses this poem wonderfully. Such a tender, emotive write. Delightful to read and I love the quote too. I’m faving it as a reminder of that classic film. Thank you for sharing my friend. X :) Christopher Grieves July 16, 2024 at 1:11 PM Dear Christina x your visit is most welcome. May you always be able to find home from wherever your heart finds itself C :) x

Gary Radice July 1, 2023 at 9:38 PM A poem with so much heart Christopher. Great cadence and excellent theming.Cheers - Gary Christopher Grieves July 1, 2023 at 10:29 PM Gary.. that means a lot! Thank you :)

Valsa George July 1, 2023 at 7:33 AM When love sprouts in a heart, life alltogether takes a new turn. We needn't fear where the journey takes. But, be assured, it will somehow turn to be pleasant. Congratulations Christopher on your POTD Christopher Grieves July 1, 2023 at 9:02 AM That is true wisdom Valsa. We all have the capacity to love, when the right person comes along! Thank you x

Daisy Meadows June 30, 2023 at 11:12 PM A lovely poem. Well done. Wizard of oz was such a good film. The film called 'Judy' was such a sad film about Judy Garlands life.It was such a shame. Christopher Grieves July 1, 2023 at 7:02 AM She was a talent for sure :)

I Am Anaya June 28, 2023 at 8:42 PM I am honored to have read your rendition of the most cinematic and wonderful stories ever! The audio, [your voice] enhanced the pleasure. Congratulations Christopher Grieves on POTD! ~I Am Anaya Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 9:35 PM Thank you Anaya! Glad you found the audio too. Lovely comments, very humbled x

Brandy Nicole June 28, 2023 at 7:34 PM "This newly found friend, Dorothy Gale." I believe she's everyone's friend. :) You've brought this movie to the poetic side, and you've done so; in such a creative way. Congratulations Christopher, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 9:27 PM The storytelling success is that we can all relate to a character in some way. Thanks Brandy! Hugs :)

Michael Tor June 28, 2023 at 7:20 PM Love your theme Christopher very creative and worthy of POTD. Congratulations... Christopher Grieves July 9, 2023 at 11:50 AM Thanks Michael! Really appreciate your support:)

Tania Kitchin June 28, 2023 at 1:53 PM Chris, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD! Christopher Grieves July 2, 2023 at 3:09 PM Tania I appreciate that, thanks x

Jim Slaughter June 28, 2023 at 11:17 AM One of my all-time favorite movies, Christopher. I try to watch it at least every couple of years. I was fortunate...way back in my acting days...to get to play the part of the Scarecrow in a production of "Wizard of Oz". It was a hoot-'n-a-half. Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 11:24 AM That's a fascinating fact, Jim. Have been scarecrow myself in years gone by.. not on a yellow brick road though. Thanks :))

Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2023 at 10:54 AM I love this! When at a standstill, just to get moving can be exhilarating! Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 11:06 AM Very true, Kim.

R J. Elless June 28, 2023 at 10:10 AM Fine poetry. All in rhyming quatrains, admirable. Congrats on Your POTD. Keep Rolling. Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 10:47 AM Thanks R.J.

Sam Kauffman June 28, 2023 at 10:08 AM Christopher, what a delightful homage to the Tin Man, Dorothy and the magic of Oz! Love that the poem comes from the Tin Man's heart! Congratulations on your very creative POTD. So unique! Blessings of yellow brick roads to you wherever they lead you. Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 10:17 AM Sam, these are wonderful words. Many thanks!

Gershon Wolf June 28, 2023 at 9:07 AM Congrats on POTD, Christopher. Oh, please congratulate Dorothy too! And not to forget -- Toto, too! Joy and Light, Gershon Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 9:25 AM Thanks for your kind words Gershon :)

Paula Goldsmith June 28, 2023 at 8:27 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write/story. Have a blessed day writing away............ Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 8:35 AM Thank you Paula - that is lovely of you :-))

Linda Alice Fowler June 28, 2023 at 6:36 AM A fun, melodic side-view of a great movie Christopher. Congratulations on POTD! :) Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 7:43 AM Linda - everyone has been so kind, yourself included. Thank you. May your own journey over the rainbow be a magical one too :)

Bill Baker June 28, 2023 at 5:16 AM Congratulations on your POTD honor, Chris! Well done. Nice rhyming and enjoyable retelling of a joyful story from the Tin Man's viewpoint. Very creative poetry. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 5:22 AM Bill great to hear from you from across the pond! You are very kind with your comments, so no axe to grind from me ;) Stay well and thank you.

John Lawless June 28, 2023 at 4:31 AM The Wicked Witch ain't gonna like this Chris....beware the flying monkeys. Nicely done..I look forward (hopefully) to a continuing series on the Scarecrow, Lion, and....the very confused Wizard Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 4:42 AM I had considered that John.. I do have a fascination with the story (and the film) and have since childhood.. I think the scarecrow was my favourite - close call though. Toto got a raw deal I thought. Bless you for your encouragement!!

David Kavanagh June 28, 2023 at 4:18 AM Excellent and most deserving POTD Chris, so much more going on here than just a metaphorical Dorothy and the tin man, I can see real life being restored after perhaps a deeply troubling period, congratulations cheers, David Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 4:23 AM Perceptive in it's ambiguousness, David. Of course the original Frank L Baum story and imagery does all of the real work for me.. but I am glad it is not too obvious leaving space for the reader to enter in. Thanks David, appreciated :)

Sotto Poet June 28, 2023 at 4:06 AM Your beautiful verses exude vitality and inspiration. This exquisite poem, Chris, was a delight from beginning to end. I offer my sincerest felicitations on achieving the distinguished honor of POTD. Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 4:14 AM Sotto - that is heart-warming for me, truly. You are clearly a gifted encourager of people - no empty space in your chest, clearly. Thank you. Thank you :)

Unseeking Seeker June 28, 2023 at 2:48 AM An absolutely lovely poem, Chris ~ enjoyed from start to finish ~ warmest congratulations on POTD Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 2:59 AM That is very generous of you, many thanks! Your comments are a real encouragement :)

William Darnell Sr June 28, 2023 at 2:22 AM Congratulations on POTD, Christopher. Sounds like Ms. Dorthy Gale has found herself a companion. Loved reading this delightful poem, thank you for sharing, and again, congratulations, Christopher! Have a Great Day! Best Wishes, William Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 2:51 AM William - fantastic to hear from you. Thanks for taking the time.. I agree. A beautiful friendship has deep roots in kindness, love and mutual respect. May we all count those blessings when they come our way :) it's a story arc I love

Beryl Edmonds June 28, 2023 at 2:01 AM Would that be the Tin man who stands in Walsall? Love the poem Christopher, enjoyed the read. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle Beryl Edmonds June 28, 2023 at 7:29 AM Yes I was referring to the Brownhills Miner. Belle Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 2:54 AM Is that the 'Jigger' or the Brownhills Miner you refer to? Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 2:14 AM Thank you so much Belle x I think this may be for Tin Men everywhere! May your heels never stop clicking :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 28, 2023 at 12:56 AM - A lovely poem, Christopher - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 1:27 AM Anne-Lise thank you and wonderful that you took the time to read and comment - you are very kind! :-))

Lin Lane June 28, 2023 at 12:56 AM Congratulations on your potd honor, Christopher. No tears of joy or you may rust again! Lin Lane June 28, 2023 at 1:33 AM Good ;-) Christopher Grieves June 28, 2023 at 1:26 AM Lin - thanks for stopping by! I had not realised, how lovely. The tin of oil is on standby :'-))

Deb M June 26, 2023 at 3:50 PM So beautifully written Chris….just lovely! Debx Christopher Grieves June 26, 2023 at 5:41 PM Thank you Debx :)) xx