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Tim's Dybbukim

I knew a young fellow named Tim Now Tim was quite slim and trim The girlies would gush And all turn to mush When Tim exposed his dybbukim © Jack Ellison 2015 For Tim: (Dybbukim: malevolent wandering spirit that enters and possesses the body of a living person until exorcized)

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/14/2015 6:45:00 AM

That would certainly turn me to mush as well! Those malevolent spirits, so irresistible! Loved this one!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/14/2015 12:48:00 PM

LOL They are irresistible aren't they! Happy you loved this one... you are the sweetest! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/26/2015 6:11:00 PM

G'day young Jack... I'm glad you added an explanation. Else wise I may have been embarrassed if I heard that word come up in conversation. Regards - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 6:16:00 PM

LOL Gave a chuckle Mr. Laurie!!! Have a great Aussie day!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/26/2015 11:27:00 AM

Poor Tim.... Run Tim Run!Maybe you can out run it... and leave it behind... Tho I must warn you... I've tried it with Dragon and it hasn't worked yet... LOL

Tim Smith
Date: 4/26/2015 6:48:00 PM

I tried to run but I think I'm hypnotized by all these big words of his.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 11:56:00 AM

Tim still has that problem but I don't need to worry anymore! I can outrun all the grey haired old ladies!!! LOL xxx

Nandita Das

Date: 4/26/2015 9:27:00 AM

Great limericks. Great fun. Keep them coming... You are a genius. #7

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 9:30:00 AM

"Genius"???? WOW! You can drop by any old time Miss Nandita! Love your comments! Hugs, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/26/2015 8:15:00 AM

Hoohaw too Jackaroonie .....what a fantabulous limy....I am honoured..... A big man hug to you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 8:23:00 AM

Love those big man hugs!!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2015 7:19:00 AM

Oh thanks God I read the footnote below..My mind went somewhere else...Lovely limerick.. : )

Tim Smith
Date: 4/26/2015 6:46:00 PM

: )

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 7:23:00 AM

LOL That was my general intention! Hey sweet Charmaine, hope you're enjoying your day with your wee one! Huggsies, love Jack xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2015 6:58:00 AM

lol love it jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/26/2015 7:04:00 AM

Tim's always questioning the kooky words I use! LOL Jackanese spoken here!!! LOL Have a super day dear sis! Hugs, Jack xxx