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Timid Lover

Timid, gutless, young man feebly muttered Then mustered spartan courage and puttered, And fluttered he like a dove And stuttered to say his love, But "Shoo - Shoo!" pretty, beloved uttered. Posted on Oct. 5, 2020 Alliteration 004 (I prefer old poems) Poetry Contest Poet Destroyer A Limerick – Syllabic count: 10/10/7/7/10 syllables

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Date: 10/7/2020 3:06:00 PM
very well done. you picked quite the form for this challenge!!
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Date: 10/7/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/7/2020 2:49:00 PM
Interesting work. Reads like a good contender. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this great comment!!
Date: 10/7/2020 4:10:00 AM
nicely done Newton, gl in the contest.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/7/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Pixie Dust, for the kind visit and the great comment!!
Date: 10/7/2020 2:39:00 AM
- Great done with these words, Newton :) - Hope your suggestion will win :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/7/2020 6:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for the great comment and the kind wish!!

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