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Timid Lover

Timid, gutless, young man feebly muttered 
Then mustered spartan courage and puttered,
And fluttered he like a dove
And stuttered to say his love,
But "Shoo - Shoo!" pretty, beloved uttered.


Posted on Oct. 5, 2020
Alliteration 004 (I prefer old poems) Poetry Contest
 Poet Destroyer A

Limerick – Syllabic count: 10/10/7/7/10 syllables

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/7/2020 3:06:00 PM very well done. you picked quite the form for this challenge!! Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 10/7/2020 5:28:00 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/7/2020 2:49:00 PM Interesting work. Reads like a good contender. Sara Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 10/7/2020 5:28:00 PM Thank you so much, Sara, for this great comment!!

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/7/2020 4:10:00 AM nicely done Newton, gl in the contest. Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 10/7/2020 6:03:00 AM Thank you so much, Pixie Dust, for the kind visit and the great comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/7/2020 2:39:00 AM - Great done with these words, Newton :) - Hope your suggestion will win :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Newton Ranaweera Date: 10/7/2020 6:02:00 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for the great comment and the kind wish!!