Timelessness is to Being

My past already lived,
my unknown future is the only place to travel-
beyond paradoxes or predictions,
 I could stand in a world beyond a human life span,
 There to begin again, a quest for knowing.


New languages, new laws, new temptations
or delights. 
 I cannot say how I will travel there,
 whether I step blindly into a parallel universe 
or use  velocity- based time dilation.

My imagination seems willing
but I feel stuck- in theories and Presentism. 
How could there be any greater mysteries
or  beauty  to be discovered?

 I think then of being childless.
 Somehow dreams for some new Utopia
 are cancelled and I

awake and sleeping
hold hands with solitude.

Suzanne Delaney

May 17th.
For Dave's Imagination Contest.

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Date: 6/3/2014 5:57:00 PM
Truly a fantastic write!!! Not amazed at all that it won. BBBravo!!!!!
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Date: 6/3/2014 1:45:00 AM
What an excellent and profound piece Suz. I can relate so well to your second stanza. Actually I found your entire poem insightful, kind of like you had one foot in another dimension and I came along for the journey. This one is going into my fav's. Congratulations on your win Suz. It would have been at the top of my list. Love, Connie P.S. You must post this one at PFT too.e
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Date: 6/3/2014 11:46:00 AM
Thanks for your kind thoughts, Connie.. I would be glad to post it on PFT.
Date: 5/29/2014 6:33:00 PM
WOW, the greater thought, goes a long way.. Love the win..>PD<
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Date: 5/28/2014 4:31:00 PM
Deep and thought evoking. Many congrat's on your win, Suzanne. Lainie
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/29/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Elaine: I do appreciate your visit, <*_*> SuZ
Date: 5/28/2014 5:19:00 AM
Great verse Suzanne n so is ur win ! congrats ! Sad ending heartfelt !
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/29/2014 11:43:00 AM
Yes....written from my heart more as therapy that sneaks in sometimes. Thanks for being a friend, Suz
Date: 5/28/2014 12:24:00 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Suzzanne
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:44:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram: Always so nice to see you. SuZ
Date: 5/27/2014 9:49:00 PM
Congrats Suzanne ....Seren
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Seren: sending hugs, SuZ
Date: 5/27/2014 9:06:00 PM
Suzanne, congrats on your creative work and win, well done!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/29/2014 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Dave: It came from my heart that ending. No one battled as hard as we did and lost -to have children. We are content it wasn't meant to be. Hugs
Date: 5/18/2014 6:23:00 AM
Wow!!! This is unique and amazing poetry. I love the last line "hold hands with solitude"
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Monteray: It came from my heart that ending. No one battled as hard as we did and lost -to have children. Now we are content it wasn't meant to be. Hugs, suZ
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:06:00 PM
I love this last line as well!