Timelessness Is To Being

My past already lived,
my unknown future is the only place to travel-
beyond paradoxes or predictions,
 I could stand in a world beyond a human life span,
 There to begin again, a quest for knowing.


New languages, new laws, new temptations
or delights. 
 I cannot say how I will travel there,
 whether I step blindly into a parallel universe 
or use  velocity- based time dilation.

My imagination seems willing
but I feel stuck- in theories and Presentism. 
How could there be any greater mysteries
or  beauty  to be discovered?

 I think then of being childless.
 Somehow dreams for some new Utopia
 are cancelled and I

awake and sleeping
hold hands with solitude.

Suzanne Delaney

May 17th.
For Dave's Imagination Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Truly a fantastic write!!! Not amazed at all that it won. BBBravo!!!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 1:45 AM
What an excellent and profound piece Suz. I can relate so well to your second stanza. Actually I found your entire poem insightful, kind of like you had one foot in another dimension and I came along for the journey. This one is going into my fav's. Congratulations on your win Suz. It would have been at the top of my list. Love, Connie P.S. You must post this one at PFT too.e
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Thanks for your kind thoughts, Connie.. I would be glad to post it on PFT.
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:33 PM
WOW, the greater thought, goes a long way.. Love the win..>PD<
George   Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Deep and thought evoking. Many congrat's on your win, Suzanne. Lainie
Delaney Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:42 AM
Thank you Elaine: I do appreciate your visit, <*_*> SuZ
A. Sharma Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 5:19 AM
Great verse Suzanne n so is ur win ! congrats ! Sad ending heartfelt !
Delaney Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Yes....written from my heart more as therapy that sneaks in sometimes. Thanks for being a friend, Suz
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 12:24 AM
A nice flight of imagination and congrats on a fine win, Suzzanne
Delaney Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Thanks Dr Ram: Always so nice to see you. SuZ
Roberts Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Congrats Suzanne ....Seren
Delaney Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Seren: sending hugs, SuZ
Sirak Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Wow!!! This is unique and amazing poetry. I love the last line "hold hands with solitude"
Delaney Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Monteray: It came from my heart that ending. No one battled as hard as we did and lost -to have children. Now we are content it wasn't meant to be. Hugs, suZ
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