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Timeless Auspicious occasions times thrice too many for a star to pivot and ~~bunker involving breathless nebulous palls chances forded o'er aroused ~~slumber engaged specters entrancing natures artful resolved ~~wonder shone speckled twilight stars brilliantly wished ~~younger ancient map trails harvesting bluish moon a gleaming ~~tumbler rejoice spills hollow depths made wholly as tear ducts rapt ~~blubber hugging past into presence fondling memories fell stars ~~go under you feel the weight of me lift apart as firebolts I and you ~~asunder bred surging rains you trade your cries and I, your eyes calms ~~thunder unleashing pains grips our sinuous veins as the fleeting hours be a ~~stumper I genuinely claim that silvery star stay lively atop to dawdle the not ~~somber dwells the amour as flesh tussle about neath a gist moon's ~~lumber our passionate plea to labor our love more knowing our time's ~~number our hands and hearts hold in dawn's presence as we embrace all forever we will ~~remember 2020 September 26 *Honorable Mention* COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (28)any form any theme ~~Brian Strand *4th Place* The night of passion and desire ~~Faraz Ajmal

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Date: 10/11/2020 3:19:00 AM
Your poem resonates imagery. I can feel your truth and ideal universal truth in each stanza. I am a fan of the tie in end words which graduate and shift in sound. A very very clever addition to a ethereal, beautiful, passionate poem.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 10/11/2020 11:43:00 AM
Wondrous words, Sigrid, always to be adoringly embraced my friend, e'er my thanks, Aloha! William
Date: 10/10/2020 12:34:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem it is, during the judging of the contest, I read it like 5 different times and found it equally beautiful each time, many congratulations on your win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Hilo Poet
Date: 10/10/2020 12:39:00 PM
Thank you for the gift of opportunity, Aloha! William
Date: 9/27/2020 6:22:00 AM
Beautiful William. Carries the reader smoothly along and evokes sweetness and intimacy. A sure winner in the contest! Linda
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/27/2020 6:32:00 AM
Sending many thanks your way, Linda, also for the encouragement, Aloha! William
Date: 9/26/2020 4:21:00 PM
This is a very very good one for the contest, William. I love the patterning and the smooth assonance of the "under" sound or the schwa sound every 4 lines.Beautiful lines!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2020 8:18:00 PM
I truly take to heart and mind your simple know-how, shared with an air of clear-cut words--no hyperbolic ones, Andrea, a heart-filled thanks, Aloha! William

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