Time To Let You Go

Beneath the sunlit sky I see your face, and in that moment you reveal your touch- I feel the way you’ve mastered your embrace, and through the night your passion is as such. Above the twilit moon I need your kiss, I beg of you to keep my secret safe- For when away your fondness I do miss, and as we said we need our tender faith. The way the spark is lit beneath the sheets, reveals the gentle ways you swiftly trace my body like a sketch down to my feet, for in your arms is where I leave my lace. Before the Lord made man you loved me so- But now it’s time for me to let you go. October 21, 2016
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Date: 11/25/2016 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, sweet girl , I love the line swiftly trace my body like a sketch down to my feet.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/20/2016 12:13:00 PM
This was amazing :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your achievement. Lovely sonnet
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Date: 11/14/2016 5:18:00 AM
you have presented well your idea i like
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Date: 11/13/2016 3:29:00 PM
Lovely, Luloo! Congrats!
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Date: 11/12/2016 7:20:00 PM
I am happy to read that you won the contest. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 11/7/2016 2:52:00 AM
Congrats Laura, for your placement with this lovely piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 11/6/2016 6:54:00 PM
Laura, back to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/6/2016 6:42:00 PM
So you've come a long way with iambic pentameter and this is a beauty. I've never read about kissing ABOVE the moon before, pretty original far as I've noticed. Very romantic and, again, you did the IP thing well enough to now say, "I Got This." Congratulations, LuLoo ... CayCay
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Date: 11/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 11/6/2016 9:35:00 AM
graceful sonnet that deserves accolade, lou... best congrats and huggs
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Date: 11/5/2016 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Laura. Many congrats on your win. Lainey.
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Date: 11/5/2016 6:06:00 PM
Luloo, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Janice
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:40:00 AM
Reminds me of Charlie Rich, Behind closed doors. I like it but am not too sure about the closing couplet.
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Date: 11/1/2016 8:54:00 AM
Just beautiful, congrats on POTD
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Date: 10/24/2016 4:56:00 AM
awesome. congratulations.
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Date: 10/24/2016 3:21:00 AM
Such a lovely, romantic Sonnet, Laura. Congratulations on your poem being honored as Poem of the Day. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/24/2016 12:23:00 AM
Very romantic, congratulations on your POTD, Laura:)
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Date: 10/23/2016 10:29:00 PM
Congrats, Laura. This is a beautiful piece...so sensually sweet that that ending caught me by surprise.
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:43:00 PM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Date: 10/23/2016 1:27:00 PM
Beautiful, tender sonnet. Congrats on POTD, luloo - well deserved! Agnes
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:42:00 PM
thank you sweet Agnes :)-luloo
Date: 10/23/2016 11:50:00 AM
Great job!! ( :
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:41:00 PM
thank you Chelcie :)-luloo
Date: 10/23/2016 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. It's a fantastic sonnet :)
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:41:00 PM
thank you Carol :)-luloo
Date: 10/23/2016 9:42:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on POTD, Laura. Just a wonderful sonnet:):)
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:40:00 PM
thank you dear DT :)-luloo
Date: 10/23/2016 9:31:00 AM
Extremely beautiful and moving sonnet Laura, congrats!
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Date: 10/23/2016 4:40:00 PM
thank you Paloma :)-luloo
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