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Time To Go

I know the bitter sorrow and pain For one sided love is a deathly woe; It is kind compared to that time I know When love's passion is on the wane. When I feel the ache and know the grace That gave glory to my night and day; Is now dying with sorrows of grey Becoming dull and so commonplace. When my whispers of love fall on deaf ears, And my hand reaches yours without thrill; When we cannot compel by force or will The sweet hunger that had no tears; When the dream has gone and love is asleep When you no longer want to be near; And all I cherish has gone from our year Then it is the sad time to weep. But there are no tears left to heal the woe For I will see you with sad dry eyes; If we try to hold it the faster love flies And I will know it is time to go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2012 1:48:00 PM
Fabulous abba rhyming! Recognizing the obvious can be heart-breaking... but when you realize that the end is upon you, it is time to sever all ties. Well done, Elizabeth!
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Date: 10/1/2011 8:54:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poem. You are a wonderful writer. i can relate to your words so well. i will enjoy reading some more of your poetry.
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Date: 9/30/2011 3:58:00 PM
You amaze me with every new form that you write on, and this is NO exception. Great write, Liz
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Date: 9/30/2011 2:52:00 PM
A heartfelt and heart-wrenching write. Most people have been burned by love at some time and they will identify with this. Hope love is treating you better right now. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 9/30/2011 12:44:00 PM
After experiments of elements, result is found. A magnet attracts iron and iron there to. If magnet touches a piece of wood, both are innocent aspiring attraction. I see your last line, what time says. You are always great, my friend Wesley. bl
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Date: 9/29/2011 9:04:00 PM
Beautiful! WOW... my life in 3 paragraphs... well almost. You have wonnderful talent and you know, it makes me want to write more. Thanks again, windyann
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Date: 9/29/2011 8:41:00 PM
very emotional write elizabeth.. this seems to be your forte' in poetry luv..u do write them so very well ..so creatively.. last stanza..priceless..
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:43:00 PM
Sometimes the heart does'nt want to let go. It's breaking inside and does'nt even know. A year can go by in the blink of an eye. And the heart doesn't know if it doesn't let go. Another years gone and it's just going to die. Soups on.
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Date: 9/29/2011 6:56:00 PM
Good poem of such heartbreak. Btw about my poem "Poetic Justice," I found out because I experienced it firsthand.
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Date: 9/29/2011 5:48:00 PM
Never experienced dying love but I am sure that if one tried to keep a relationship going and it was dead that it would go even faster than if the two just parted friends..Enjoyed reading your penned thoughts..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/29/2011 4:58:00 PM
I am such a fan! This piece is so beautifully, artistically done. Love, daver
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Date: 9/29/2011 4:03:00 PM
You've captured the end of a relationship perfectly here, my friend. Beautifully written, as ever
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Date: 9/29/2011 3:54:00 PM
A good write Elizabeth, on the peculiar facets faced by people involved in love and the reality of personality, expectation disapointment, fallability encountered, all the best as you go along..
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:46:00 AM
awesome poem Elizabeth, so sad so profound, yet sadly oh so true, for so many. harry
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Date: 9/29/2011 10:37:00 AM
The passion of sorrow is well expressed here dear poet, and, the loathe of loneliness radiate in this write as well, without your write being blunt and saying so. Well constructed write Elizabeth ! Have a beautiful week my friend, (should I be saying; 'Philly' friend?) *smiles* Much love, james
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:29:00 AM
Pain and sorrow of heartbreak beautifully defined. Nice job
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Date: 9/29/2011 6:47:00 AM
Lizzie, there is beauty in pain and you have shown it to us. The fact that beauty can be found in pain is itself hopeful. I love your poem. Tony
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Date: 9/29/2011 1:18:00 AM
Very nice, elizabeth. YOu tell so well what happens when love dries up.
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Date: 9/28/2011 11:59:00 PM
BLEW ME AWAY, YET AGAIN! Elizabeth, you write beautiful bayonets! Piercing heart-spots with precision and leaving one both amazed and - at times- turned inside out. Sad smiles sent your way, Hugs, Cyndi.
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