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Time Marches On

Original Poem whose face is looking back at me is it my countenance that I see mirror cracked with age reminder of what used to be the visage now the fates decree life, another page Last Line Poem Life, another page Today becomes tomorrow We hardly notice Until more yesterdays seen Than tomorrow’s sunrises

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/20/2016 11:43:00 PM
Barbara, Congratulations on your awesome "Famous last line win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/19/2016 5:51:00 PM
Your poem defines aging with such accepting insight. I love these Barbara. Congratulations on your placement! #7
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:51:00 PM
I love the progression in your poem, Barbara...very true. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:38:00 PM
Interesting take on the contest. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:22:00 PM
Great poem on the fleeting moments of life:) congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 3/17/2016 9:03:00 PM
Hi Barbara, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/17/2016 5:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Barbara:)
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:52:00 AM
Barbara, lovely poems, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:09:00 AM
Nice
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Date: 3/4/2016 2:02:00 PM
They pass quicker everyday! Love your expression of time. Peace Ms. Barbara:)
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