Time Away

I am told that Time
are increments...the
happy man counts 
his by kisses – a family
hour, a dream for the
thrifty~ wise, a short REM 
seeming somehow linked 
to greater eternity – 

I am told that Time 
is precious – or burden
to those without Power,
to those hungry – 
alone as empty and sad

Time with God I've never
found wasted...

Though I've managed
good use of all these

Time away from you
has always been, pure hell....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Maverick Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Enjoyed the thoughts and pen.'
DiMino Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Thank you, Joe; blessings my friend.
George Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 7:19 PM
"Time with God I've never found wasted...' We can engage in many fruitful pursuits with our time which may or may not bring us rewards. But time spent with God is surely rewarding. Beautiful thoughts shared and beautiful poen, dear Joe...
DiMino Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 2:24 AM
Surely I was thrown out, for I can't imagine why I would have left heaven to be born...only to go back again...must have be damn good reason I bet. Thank you, Valsa; blessings my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Time with God never wasted…time away from your love, pure hell. Enjoyed!
DiMino Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Ah! To be that young, insanely passionate poet of yore! Those were the days my friend.
Volumes Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 2:39 PM
To have invoked the inspiration for such wonderfully passionate emotion , this person must be immensely special.......... Beautiful poetry Joe.
DiMino Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 6:13 PM
At the time, she was the world to me. With the angels now. One never forgets.... She moved on from me long before her passing. But she returns in my poetry. Who knows? Maybe she kept a warm spot in her heart for me. It was complicated, but never bitterness between us.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Lost love is always dreadful. I lost one once. But God had His plans and the one I married was an angel.
DiMino Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Irreplaceable! I am certain my friend. Somehow it will all come out right I truly believe. Blessings! Joe.
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Oh!! What a nice love note for someone. I can't imagine what some people go through each day, and this is a reminder to me to be thankful for each second of good that I have in my life. Thank you for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara
DiMino Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Thank you, Sara; have beautiful day!
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