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Poetry/Rhyme/Octelle/Time And Leaves Sublime
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Human Written

Form Octelle Rhyme, 88777788 aabbccaa

Written, November 04, 2024
For the Flash Poetry Challenge, Nov 02-08 2024
Sponsor, Mark Toney, Judged 11/09/2024

Selected as Featured Poems #3

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Time falls back and trees say its time, so, they let go of leaves sublime. Our view suddenly has hues, red and yellow for the muse; gathering in piles wind swept, I am sure the trees have wept. Time falls back and trees say its time, so, they let go of leaves sublime.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/9/2024 4:01:00 PM

Lovely, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2024 2:13:00 PM

Kim, thank you for the compliment, Constance

Lin Lane

Date: 11/9/2024 10:39:00 AM

I'm not familiar with this form, but I think I'll have to give it a try. Colorfully expresses Autumn and how I also feel about their loss.

Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2024 10:52:00 AM

Lin, thank you for the compliment, it is a sweet short form, Constance

Mark Toney

Date: 11/9/2024 8:46:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Constance. Your poem was randomly chosen to feature in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Your rhyme is mesmerizing!

Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2024 10:54:00 AM

Mark, thank you for the challenge and inspiration, and thanks for selecting my poem to be featured, so honored and looking forward to the next Flash Challenge, Constance

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/5/2024 9:55:00 AM

A beautiful poem in Octelle form Constance, lovely picture too. All the best for Mark Toney’s ‘Flash Poetry’ blog challenge … Beryl

Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2024 10:54:00 AM

Beryl, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, Constance

Michael Tor

Date: 11/4/2024 6:57:00 PM

I love how you portrayed the trees to be sad when giving up the dead leaves. Such a creative piece from you Csonstance love this one from you a favorite...

Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2024 10:55:00 AM

Michael, thank you for the comment, compliment and fav, Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/4/2024 3:11:00 PM

Hello Constance, Yes the leaves says it is time to fall. When they do we rake them in piles then bagged them for the4 dump. Love 7 Friendship,/ Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/8/2024 4:55:00 PM

Hello Constance, Yes that is what we do. I am raking leaves tomorrow. After that I hope it is done. I hope the wind blows all the leaves off the trees. Lo ve & Friendship /Darlene/

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2024 4:03:00 PM

Darlene, yep that's what we do, love Constance