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For Sara Jama's Time Stops For No One Poetry Contest

#42 on Top 100 New Poems list as of Feb. 22, 2025

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Sometimes on Discovery TV, there's time-lapse to teach and dazzle us. We might see that naked jay (before he's turned to blue) in just mere moments transforming! He masquerades in feathers and quickly grows. Maybe we will witness the feeble endeavors which finally propel him into flight; as the camera follows him, he goes. . . On some enchanted tropic isle is the species of a tree that some of us have never seen. The camera's eye might focus on a random bud among its glossy leaves. Soon it blossoms pink petals and if we watch some more, perhaps we'll see the purple of its star apple emerging. Then we'll see it grow, and if left not plucked, shrivel up and go. . . We are but mere ions in the spectrum of a universe we've entered through a magic door. Miraculously born, we grow. But at first it all seems so slow. . . Then one day we try our wings. Some of us may soar. Others, like an apple never tried, will fall. But all of us will look back before we go, and we'll think how much it seemed a dream. Time always goes. . . . and then we're gone.

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Date: 2/8/2025 1:23:00 PM
Andrea, your poem is wonderful and true. And also sad to think how tiny we really are. and how brief our stay. I'm faving this one!
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Date: 2/6/2025 9:04:00 PM
So true...makes us think <3
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Date: 2/1/2025 3:38:00 PM
Lovely words describing natures wonders and the ending our lives transformation. Deep thoughts in this one Andrea and you captured everything so well. Again best wishes for the Contest...Hugs...
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Date: 2/1/2025 8:47:00 AM
Andrea, you've constructed a logical and descriptive account of life that I can relate to easily. I love the directness and clarity of poetry like this. Smiles!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2025 12:54:00 PM
thanks, Duke. I think I am TOO direct for some people.
Date: 1/31/2025 6:09:00 AM
What a deep and profound poem this is sweet andrea, so different to what we usually read, for this topic as youve gone so deep and made me think and i really must highlight the lines "We are but mere ions in the spectrum of a universe we've entered through a magic door. Miraculously born, we grow. " just love that!!!! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/1/2025 12:57:00 PM
Thanks, dear friend.
Date: 1/30/2025 12:24:00 PM
Going going..!!! Whooh the tick tock of events Never relents..many wents and guises before Dis-guises leave us so.' Bereft forlorn its the Paradox norm..Just some reflection before i Go.' P S, well written Andrea.)
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Date: 1/30/2025 5:43:00 AM
Time, defined by a very gifted writer soul: unlike the reflective camera, living treasure from depths and heights only a divinely planted heart, beneath the surface, in the deep interior of miracle being can capture and display so marvelously. A FAV!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/30/2025 5:17:00 PM
Thanks so much for thst
Date: 1/30/2025 4:04:00 AM
Nice poem. The last stanza is so true. Best on the contest
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Date: 1/30/2025 2:04:00 AM
so true, Tv can be a magic door, and poetry too, well said poet andrea, enjoyed your poem
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Date: 1/30/2025 1:54:00 AM
- Interesting ... great writing, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/29/2025 11:43:00 PM
As time goes change is inevitable.We are also to change or fall.A poem nicely penned.
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Date: 1/29/2025 9:09:00 PM
Andrea, "Others, like an apple never tried, will fall. But all of us will look back before we go" A taste of what could've been; spice of life. Finely written slice of time-lapsed pie. -Richard
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