Time

Our lives revolves around it funny thing is we have no control over it, it waits for no man sometimes it controls us... The fear that we'll run out of it makes us rush through life as if being chased we loose the true meaning of living... we miss the joy because we're ruled by time, even when the clock stops time is still ticking time for the past, time for the present and time for the future...

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/12/2010 6:45:00 AM

Can't help but nod to this one, Wilma--yikes time sure is elusive! & yeah it's amazing how there just could never be enough time! Btw just one extra "o" in lose, Line 1100hope this helps :) --nikko :)

Mitch White

Date: 6/10/2010 10:47:00 PM

So true- I am sure people were happier before the invent of the timepiece Smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2010 6:09:00 PM

well, this is one ANYone can get. haha (but instead of light, I would put it as melancholy!! I sure do not like how fast it goes, leaving me in the dust) Luv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2010 11:57:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon Wilma. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/10/2010 7:43:00 AM

and time to read this wonderful poem harry