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Tiptoeing unnoticed, out of range of sight, like a thief, it slips by in the night. Claiming it can heal all things, it flies without wings ever sought, time never bought. Back, remembrance brings; forward, hope eternal springs. Easily wasted, hard to spend right, tiptoeing unnoticed, out of range of sight. ————— for the Writing Challenge - Andaree Form - Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France checked at howmanysyllables.com written on 1/18/23

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Date: 2/5/2023 11:58:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:24:00 AM
Jeff, congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, Constance
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Date: 1/19/2023 11:34:00 AM
This is awesome, Jeff: Into my favs. SuZ
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/19/2023 12:30:00 PM
Glad you liked it, kind of an interesting form!
Date: 1/18/2023 7:05:00 PM
I really like how you met this writing challenge, Jeff. A pleasure to read. Thanks, gw
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/18/2023 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, I really appreciate that
Date: 1/18/2023 7:00:00 PM
Great poem. Well written :)
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Date: 1/18/2023 3:15:00 PM
Very nicely constructed. Enjoyed seeing and reading this.
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