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Relentless in it’s movement like the ticking of a clock as time keeps marching forward for our future to unlock. The past is but a memory the present but a blur; this moment gone in just a blink as “now” becomes the times that were. This ticking seems so infinite eternal in its life; forever forging on ahead, its endless moments rife. But as for us a different tune, we know our time will end; for us the ticking soon will cease; prepare yourself my friend. Love your neighbor and your God and nature here on earth; give service to your fellow man, the measure of your worth. July 4, 2020 Poem of the Day - July 6, 2020

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Date: 2/2/2021 9:19:00 AM
Very nice poem indeed, John. I particularly enjoyed your second quatrain beginning with, "The past is but a memory..." loved it!
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/2/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank so much, Ken, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 1/22/2021 3:18:00 AM
What a wonderful and brilliant poem John, a great message and reminder, another fav for me, Hugs Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/22/2021 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words and the Fav, Emilia, I appreciate you taking "time" to read my poetry. Hugs, John
Date: 8/19/2020 9:18:00 PM
Well said, This is such a mind-pondering one!
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/17/2020 2:56:00 AM
Thank you, Estela.
Date: 7/29/2020 7:11:00 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest _Constance
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/30/2020 2:08:00 AM
Thank you, Constance, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 7/15/2020 5:53:00 AM
You are an extraordinary poet! Congratulations, John, on POTD! This time ticker was worth the time.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/15/2020 5:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim, I'm humbled by your kind words. Hugs, John
Date: 7/9/2020 4:56:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, John! So deep and well executed in every sense. I often think about the passing of time and its fleeting qualities. This is a fave for me! :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/10/2020 4:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Laura, I appreciate it. And thanks for the fave. John
Date: 7/8/2020 4:55:00 PM
Stunning piece John so excellently penned with nice rhyme and flow. Blessings,Gordon
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/8/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thank you for these kinds comments, Gordon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/8/2020 8:21:00 AM
Very well penned and such a prescient message.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/8/2020 8:55:00 AM
Thanks, Kenneth, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 7/7/2020 2:27:00 PM
Your words have always left me in awe John!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/7/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 7/7/2020 8:57:00 AM
Love the wisdom of your words, John...a belated congrats on POTD! Hugs, Rhonda xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/7/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rhonda, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 7/6/2020 7:10:00 PM
yeah, it's tough to be an endangered specie....
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, John
Date: 7/6/2020 7:08:00 PM
Great inspiring outreach my friend, Tom, for it is easy to see your caring input and amazing efforts of this well-written piece, and please accept my compliments for your placement of POTD -- Aloha~@William
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, William.
Date: 7/6/2020 4:45:00 PM
Time does seem to have wings but not before catching this reminder of the truly timely things in our lives - faith, service, loving our neighbor and loving our God. Congratulations on your POTD, John! Blessings! Enjoy this honor.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Sam, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/6/2020 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I love your line, "Love your neighbor and your God." If everyone would do this the world would be a great place. Enjoy your win and day...........
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. John
Date: 7/6/2020 3:38:00 PM
Excellent POTD, John. Congratulations :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 4:06:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 7/6/2020 3:31:00 PM
John, excellent message about time and how we are to use it wisely. Wonderful flow and rhythm to it, I could see this making a wonderful song. Congrats on a well-deserved POTD, enjoy the honor ~ John
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 8:53:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, John, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/6/2020 2:06:00 PM
Timeless message! Congratulations... Pangiota Enjoy this honor!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Panagiota, I'm glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 7/6/2020 12:41:00 PM
When we help others we are helping ourselves to grow spiritually too. This is a beautiful poem expressed divinely John. Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored as POTD! It is so deserving of the honor. I am saving this gem to my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 2:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, it is an honor to be selected as POTD and it is an honor for me that you have included it in your favorites. Thank you my dear friend, I so appreciate your support. Hugs, John
Date: 7/6/2020 12:14:00 PM
The last stanza says it all...Congratulations John on POTD...Well done
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/6/2020 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. Your words are amazing. Never forget that. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, B, I appreciate you and the support you give me. Hugs, John
Date: 7/6/2020 10:52:00 AM
Back with congrats on your richly deserved POTD honor, John. Best always, Gershon
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 12:24:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/6/2020 10:22:00 AM
Wonderful message. Congrats on your POTD
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne.
Date: 7/6/2020 9:59:00 AM
Great use of the 8 word challenge, John, very inspirational as well. Congratulations on POTD, and good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 10:30:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it. This isn't a contest entry since I didn't stick to the contest rules. Hugs, John
Date: 7/6/2020 6:34:00 AM
I was not the only one who saw the value of your time lines. Congratulations on this potd, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna, I appreciate you. John
Date: 7/6/2020 6:33:00 AM
congratulations on POTD!! I think you so very well captured and put into words, our old friend Time !! WELL DONE!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/6/2020 7:35:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike, I appreciate it. John
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