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time-space heaven

space-time serves a purpose being that, said 'space' is predetermined but, it is dimensions of the fourth that matter from depths to surface; a return from hell (...till late at night that which mattered would be broken, smote, and shattered oers't my chamber floor, and nothing more...) now in the sun i see what it 'means' to be free (...uh! space-time determined, and, there-by vermin...) space changes, it is a measure, of time, time rules (the being ...time-space ...ah... the god) in time-space now i find a way, andt enjoy each and every second of each and every day (...i'm stll here ...never stray ...one foot in the grave and eventually on my way)

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Date: 10/17/2019 5:50:00 PM
Oh my gosh this one is breath taking!
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Date: 8/30/2019 4:04:00 PM
Hello Sand Brown Your poem is beautifully written. It does stimulate one's imagination. Well done. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
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Date: 8/30/2019 4:55:00 PM
thanks very much...i've two hobbies...writhing and abstract mathematics (ohhh love it love it luv it luvit) ...anyway where was i ?...oh yeh...abstract...i knew life would make sense somehow : )
Date: 12/23/2018 2:14:00 PM
An incredible write where I must reread again! Thought provoking and soul invoking. I so enjoy the depth of your writings my friend. :)
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Date: 12/23/2018 2:41:00 PM
sorry that it was confusing...defined space is as determined, a trap...but time is our freedom
Date: 8/2/2018 11:25:00 AM
...again, sand blown away...
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:22:00 PM
Time and space - unharnessed - we try - too mysterious.
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Date: 7/30/2018 10:22:00 PM
To the higher plane of existence (consciousness) thru death's gate. This shimmering poem illuminates, Sand B. Your poetry sings electric w/photon grace. Love your pen stripes. You wear it well. Stellar write. Listening to some dreamy music while reading this celestial poetry. "Slomotion" by Jazzmasters. Love and joy always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBImosJdia8
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Date: 7/31/2018 7:09:00 AM
great you're into jazz...slomotion by jazzmaster sounds good (on rereading: my pen seemed awkward in writing; here's to time-space.