Time-Space Heaven

space-time serves a purpose
being that, said 'space' is predetermined but,
it is dimensions of the fourth that matter
from depths to surface; a return from hell

(...till late at night that which mattered
would be broken, smote, and shattered
oers't my chamber floor, and
nothing more...)

now in the sun
i see
what it 'means'
to be free
 
(...uh! space-time
determined,
and, there-by
vermin...)

space changes,
it is a measure,
of time,
time rules

(the being
...time-space
...ah...
the god)

in time-space
now i find a way, andt
enjoy each and every second
of each and every day

(...i'm stll here
...never stray
...one foot in the grave
and eventually on my way)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/17/2019 5:50:00 PM
Oh my gosh this one is breath taking!
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Date: 8/30/2019 4:04:00 PM
Hello Sand Brown Your poem is beautifully written. It does stimulate one's imagination. Well done. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
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Date: 8/30/2019 4:55:00 PM
thanks very much...i've two hobbies...writhing and abstract mathematics (ohhh love it love it luv it luvit) ...anyway where was i ?...oh yeh...abstract...i knew life would make sense somehow : )
Date: 8/2/2018 11:25:00 AM
...again, sand blown away...
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Date: 7/31/2018 2:22:00 PM
Time and space - unharnessed - we try - too mysterious.
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Date: 7/30/2018 10:22:00 PM
To the higher plane of existence (consciousness) thru death's gate. This shimmering poem illuminates, Sand B. Your poetry sings electric w/photon grace. Love your pen stripes. You wear it well. Stellar write. Listening to some dreamy music while reading this celestial poetry. "Slomotion" by Jazzmasters. Love and joy always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBImosJdia8
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Date: 7/31/2018 7:09:00 AM
great you're into jazz...slomotion by jazzmaster sounds good (on rereading: my pen seemed awkward in writing; here's to time-space.
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