Till We

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TILL WE

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 20 JANUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Passengers on existence boat we are Venturing over realities turbulent waters Praying never misfortune’s reef to ram Till we bid farewell to life! © Demetrios Trifiatis 20 January 2017

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Probir Gupta

Date: 1/20/2017 5:39:00 AM

Beautiful touches of philosophy ... profound thoughts expressed in delectable poetry ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/20/2017 5:54:00 AM

Happy that you have analyzed it in such a way dear, Probir! I humbly thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2017 3:19:00 AM

- I think we'll get much turbulent waters in the near future ... a "big day" today for the whole world - A great poem, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/20/2017 5:58:00 AM

Yes, I am afraid so! Let us pray for better days! Thank you so much my dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs

White Wolf

Date: 1/20/2017 1:46:00 AM

Another gem, Demetrios. You have a unique way of expressing thoughts, or philosophies! I'll try and stay in the crow's nest if it's all the same to you. Haha.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/20/2017 4:54:00 AM

I was brought up in a small village up on the mountains, they do not hunt together, The Raven just steals! haha!

White Wolf
Date: 1/20/2017 2:51:00 AM

The Raven hunts with the wolf! /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/20/2017 1:58:00 AM

A Wolf in the crow's nest? How intriguing my dear friend! Haha! Thank you for your precious visit and comment!