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Till Then

He sits wounded on broken crystals where his beloved's image reflects; His placid visage is like frozen lake on bleak winter morn. As his wounds gently bleed he whispers her name~ And the echo soars on distant northern lights. As she hears his fading voice she runs to him~ Unmindful of the arrows until she finally finds him before he murmurs, "Till then, my love". 01.28.2021

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Date: 1/29/2021 4:55:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this moving, lovely poem, JCB. Janice
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:45:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and storytelling in your wounded and very melancholy verses JCB. So happy to see this on the winners list! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/28/2021 9:15:00 AM
Tenderly heartfelt... Beautiful poem, JCB
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