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Till My Poems Are, No More

I bequeath to you my poems, For words are all I own-- May the images of snow and fall Bring you comfort when alone. And I will leave you all of it; The moonlight on the moor-- As well the quiet, leafy wood, Or a sunbathed distant shore. And among the rhyme and imagery; The metaphor, and theme-- You'll read of rose and morning dew, Of midnight naps, and dream. And somewhere in between the lines The fantasy turns real-- So take these words I proffer you, And touch, and taste, and feel. Amazing are the things you'll see, Like the ivy-covered wall-- Or the icy streams of diamond And the spill of waterfall. So enchanting is the moonlight, So too the autumn breeze-- Oh how I'll miss the butterflies And the stand of ancient trees. So precious is the lily pond, The wildflowers too-- Take comfort in the song of rain And the pansies playful hue. How amazing is the hummingbird In uncertain, frenzied flight-- Reminds me of the dawn and eve As they argue, day or night. And in the valley of the glen, Where stands the steeple church-- There remains a knee-high meadow, And a lovely stand of birch. So Immerse yourself in wondering, Set your spirit to the sky-- Behold as children, puffs of cloud; The bee and butterfly. And let your palette taste the wind, Hear the quiet of the snow-- While delighting in the jasmine; The sweetest scent I know. Take my words and nurture them, Kindly revel in my dream-- And keep alive the buttercup, As well the mountain stream. May you sleep the night, and linger; That my dream may carry on-- Give life to every word and thought Till the images are gone. May you celebrate the beauty; May you open every door-- Till the sun is swallowed by the sea, And my poems are, no more. ~M

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/9/2014 11:49:00 PM
OHHHH MEL.... Your Poem Is WONDERFUL PLEASE LET THEM ALWAYS BE.. ... what a joy to read.. I read it twice and learn something each time.. you are a master at this.. hugs Brooke
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/10/2014 8:05:00 AM
ha ha.. you make me smile.. thank you... hugs
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/10/2014 1:46:00 AM
If you say so. Mom taught me never to argue with beautiful, intelligent women :) I said, fine, where are they? Now I know...xxx...mel
Date: 5/7/2014 7:35:00 PM
Beautiful poem Mel, loved it from beginning to end............Vera.............
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/8/2014 12:29:00 AM
Thank you Vera, very much. I'm glad you liked it--it's a bit long, but I felt like writing. See ya soon. Hugs ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 5:00:00 PM
this is absolutely beautiful! i love the idea of it but the way you've expressed it is truly amazing...
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:03:00 AM
It was a bit tricky, but I kept writing till the muse ran out the door. Thank you, Ilene, for reading this rather long poem, and for liking it. That means a lot. Big hugs ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 2:03:00 PM
Mel, this is simply beautiful.I feel your desire to have your progeny experience your gift.I myself have no children.But I have wonderful nieces and nephews.One of them, Darla Appleleaf, posts on this site. You might want to explore her page.As for my poem I promised you earlier, "Twilight Mistress", I am still debating if I should post it. It was written many years ago before I developed my voice.I fear it may be shallow.But I am still thinking about it.Thanks for stopping by my page.Peace..Sam
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:07:00 AM
Very perceptive of you, Sam. I do have this sense of mortality, and an even greater sense of wanting to leave the kids and grandkids a legacy. Who knows, maybe one of them will find my stuff interesting. Wish I had poems from my grandparents. How cool would that be--and how revealing. Thank you, my friend. And post away, depth be damned! ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 1:45:00 PM
This is a truly wonderful poem, Mel! I loved the rhyming and the imagery was just beautiful. This is one of your best!.... We do have a similar style of poetry, as you mentioned. Maybe we could collaborate sometime. :)
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:10:00 AM
Sure, lets. I'm in the middle of one now, but once that's wrapped up, I'll soup ya. Thanks for the read and very kind remarks. Hey, I'm a poet, I need the reassurance :) Hugs ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 8:11:00 AM
wow and wow Mel this is fantastic such imagery that takes you there hugs 7
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:12:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow. I truly do appreciate the read and the encouragement. Shoot, I'll take wow's and 7's anytime :) Hugs ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 6:50:00 AM
this is one of my favorites
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/7/2014 12:26:00 AM
I got two hands, so no problem. Then again, you might be too hot to handle. Dare I get burned? ~M
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/6/2014 6:22:00 AM
ah no twin, just a lot of free time on my hands. the world couldn't handle two of me, well maybe you could lol. xox
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:14:00 AM
I should hope so. I wrote it for you :) Thanks, babe. Your always there to say kind things, to me, and seemingly everyone. I think maybe you have a twin and there's two of you working this site. No, too terrible to contemplate! Hugs ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 6:43:00 AM
Very good, Mel...created a sense of sadness that the beauty you create with words could have an end. Lovely!
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:16:00 AM
It will have an end, and I guess I felt the need to express that. Thank you Faye for taking the time to read and to generously comment. I'm grateful. ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 6:12:00 AM
Mel, you are going into my favorite poet file! I love your work...how you play with words with such ease, how precious words are to you...is all so amazing. It does make one want to linger...Lovely!
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:20:00 AM
How sweet! No one's put me in their favorite poet file, that I know of. Do I get out for recreation, or is it a 24 hour lock-down kind of thing? I'm honored either way :) Thanks my dear for saying such nice and encouraging things. I am grateful Big hugs ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 4:06:00 AM
i love the images you have created here and also the emotions you arouse.. :) 2nd 4th 5th and 7th these are my favourites here.. how lovely are the children puffing clouds and not merely bubbles.. :) Im glad i stopped by and read this splendid write.. :) straight to my faves.. :) olive eloisa here.. :) GOd bless.. :)
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:23:00 AM
Thank you Olive. I am touched and honored by your comments. It's a great thing to be someone's fave in anything, so thank you. I hope you'll drop by often, as I typically post one poem per night--not tonight though. God bless, Olive Peace and hugs ~M
Date: 5/5/2014 3:49:00 AM
Always enjoy your poems Mel. This one included.. Well done my friend.
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Mel Merrill
Date: 5/6/2014 12:25:00 AM
Kind of you, Tim. I am very appreciative of your read and comment. We're all busy, so it means a lot. Peace ~M

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